英语差的学生如何写作文【一】
亲爱的张后宇老师：
一转眼，我在这个陌生的学校生活了十三天，从刚来这里的不情愿瞬间变成了依依不舍，我发现了原来这个学校有太多太多值得我留恋的地方，这里的老师十分和蔼，这里的同学幽默有趣，我打心底里喜欢上了这个著名的杭州外国语学校了。
刚迈进学校大门时，我的心里一直在想：“这里的老师会不会很严厉？老师会体罚学生吗？当我们不听话时老师会请家长吗？这种种猜想在我脑海里一遍又一遍地重复着。当我上完一天的课程后，我顿时觉得一切似乎是神圣的，老师一点也不凶，反而像我们的朋友一样对待我们。我特别喜欢上您的课，因为我觉得您上的课就像在听别人讲故事一样，生动有趣，有声有色，现在离回家还有几天时间，我真希望时间可以倒流，让我再回到7月10日那天，那么，我还有十五天在这里生活，如果有机会，我一定还要来杭外参加夏令营，我永远不会忘记我在这里的美好回忆，更不会忘记曾经教过我的老师，那句句叮咛，那声声嘱咐，一直在我的耳边回响，张老师，希望你别忘记您有这么一个学生，曾经把您当作自己偶像的学生，我也会像您说的那样好好学习，我也不会您失望的，我会给您写信，也会在QQ上与您聊天，我们可以这样保持联系吗？教过我的所有老师，我真的特别特别特别特别（无数个特别）为什么会这么迷恋您呢？也许是因为您年轻，也许是因为您像姐姐，反正不管怎么样我就是喜欢您，别人不能阻拦我！否则我要他们好玩。（嘻嘻，张老师我就是这样有一点点野蛮的性格，请别见怪哦！）
亲爱的张老师，如果您可以当我姐姐的话，那我就高兴得疯掉了！！！现在是白天吗？哦，那我就是白日做梦了！bye bye，张老师！眼睛酸了吧，呵呵！
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20xx年XX月XX日
英语差的学生如何写作文【二】
Everyone has a familiar place in his life, such as parks, supermarkets, and their own rooms. Of all, my most familiar is my room.
The door is west, and there are two windows on both sides of the door. They are "North Window" and "south window". Opposite the doorway is a small balcony, there is a small wardrobe in the balcony, with my clothes when I was a child. My bed is toward the south window, the bed is neatly placed with pillows and quilts. My computer desk faces the North window. There is a regular computer on the computer desk. As soon as I got into the room, I saw my favorite, the computer, and an eye light. Northeast corner is an unusual desk. There are many books on the table. There are dictionaries, books borrowed in the library, encyclopedia books bought by ourselves, and snacks: egg rolls, candy, and my favorite large bottle of coke. The southeastern corner is my wardrobe, with school uniforms, clothes, socks and underpants in the wardrobe. Also with bed sheets, quilt towel. There was an almost useless old TV on the cupboard. There is a DVD player on the TV. In the southwest, it's a big wardrobe for mom and dad. Beside the wardrobe, it was a dresser. I had a photo of my childhood on the platform. It was very lovely.
This is my room, is it beautiful? You are welcome to visit my colorful room.
英语差的学生如何写作文【三】
nowadays, we can see some boys and girls who live in a small world of their own. they bury themselves among books and are proud of themselves. they think that it will make them lose their face if they do housework for they often think themselves very noble.
these young people are wrong. in my opinion every student should have a knowledge of housework. after all, they will have a family of their own, and they should do their part in keeping a good home. boys should also learn to do housework, for what will they do if they remain single? though not all boys remain single,yet they will be very helpful in the family if they know some housework. anyhow they will not lose anything, but, on the contrary, they will gain something useful.
for what i said above, we can find some eamples of our fellow-students studying abroad. all young men do housework as girls do. someone would argue that we can employ servants. this is true.however, what shall we do if the servant leaves us and all things are left to ourselves? we just cannot leave our clothes as they are and let worms and ants eat them up. and what can we do it we go and study in a foreign country where servants are out our means to employ? we must work for ourselves. why not start to learn to do housework now or else it will be too late? everyone should learn to do housework. what do you think about my idea, boys and girls?
英语差的学生如何写作文【四】
文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕思念爸爸进行。文章边叙事边抒情。结尾处集中表达情感，既照应开头又总结全文。首尾连贯，一气呵成。
美中不足的是：文章结尾处的永远一次用的不恰当。
文章语言虽朴实却令人感动，字里行间可以看出小作者对爸爸的想念。
英语差的学生如何写作文【五】
敬爱的老师：
您好！
老师，您曾在那神圣的七尺讲台，洒下您的汗水滴滴；老师，您曾亲切的教育我们；老师，您曾送过多少界届毕业班啊！老师，您把您的一生都用在学生身上，您就像一只蜡烛一样，永不停息的绽放着光和热；老师……
老师，在您接这个班以前，说实话，我的作文并不是很好，可是就是您的一句话，改变了我对作文无趣的想法：
您说过：“作文一定要真，真的事情就是从生活中积累来的。”从此，我便观察起生活，我发现了生活其实也很有趣。比如，听完同学讲的一个小笑话后有什么想法；逛街时看见有人买衣服在讲价；考试前后的心情。还有我不停的看作文书，有时觉得看没有读记得快，便一个人躲在厕所高声朗读。再加上我学了一年的作文，作文水平有了明显的提高。老师，我的点滴进步也有您的一份功劳，是您为我打下了一定的基础。
老师，9月10日那天，有好多同学都送了礼物表示感谢，我却没有送，那是因为我知道您不是希望每年都得到学生的礼物，而是每年都希望得到学生最好的成绩，因为那是学生的改变，也是对您工作的肯定。
老师，您的爱，像一股暖流，永远温暖着学生的心；老师，您的爱，又像一把熊熊燃烧的火焰，照亮我学习的前程，我将终生难忘！
老师，您辛苦了！
祝：
一帆风顺工作顺利！
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20xx年XX月XX日
