四年级下册英语写my day的小作文【一】
今天来翰林写作。今天的课程和以前不同。今天老师让我们自己创作漫画。以前只看漫画，今天想创作漫画都想不起来了。
我正想着，突然眼前一亮，一个好主意浮现在脑海。然后，稍微修改一下，我就搞定了。故事是这样的：有一栋三层楼，上面住着三个人。一楼的人爱去外面喝楼上花的露水，二楼的人爱采石榴？三楼的人爱打大刀。有一天二楼的人来阳台或者晒石榴？一楼还接露水，但大刀手的大刀不小心掉下来打在石榴上。石榴？他被打了一拳，正好打到了喝露水的人，然后被送进了医院。
刚开始画的不好，修改了很多才画完。
当我拿出作品和同学一起看的时候，他们立刻笑了起来，这让我知道漫画有时候是有用的。
四年级下册英语写my day的小作文【二】
嘎吱嘎吱（铅笔擦纸的声音）！啊，现在我在画漫画！漫画不是只有看了才开心的。画漫画也是一件很开心的事。为什么。怎么说呢，啊。嗯，人类来到这个世界，总是期望在历史上刻上自己的名字。那个？漫画家有家室，年纪大了。即使他突然去世，他的作品也会流传下来。也就是说，他的名字一直流传下来。
但是要成为一名漫画家绝对不容易。漫画家深受漫画家之苦。/不能出错/必须在截止日期前画好/夏天和冬天，为了画好，空调和暖气是必须的。这三点是最大的痛苦。（哪里苦？==）
还有，漫画家有很多乐趣。虽然很辛苦，但是真的能在历史上留下名字，各种故事都是这样流传下来的。当然，我还在练习，我想我永远不会离开这条路。我从九岁开始画画！快三年了。偶尔如果一天什么都没画，也有觉得很烦的日子。现在这只是整个事情的一部分。所以，就这样。拜拜。嘎吱。都是错的
努力，努力。
四年级下册英语写my day的小作文【三】
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
四年级下册英语写my day的小作文【四】
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around.
How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a ten minutes break, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes(笑话 or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers.
