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动物园作文写作框架(动物园作文总分总结构)

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动物园作文写作框架(动物园作文总分总结构)

动物园作文写作框架【一】

在森林里,有许多的动物都被老虎吃掉了。于是小动物们就想了一个办法,就是在这些小动物们选出一个最美的小动物,想方设法把老虎的牙齿和爪子拔掉。选来选去,它们选出了小兔晶晶。

有一天,晶晶正在洗衣服。老虎走过来,看见了晶晶,一见钟情。他每天都在一旁窥视晶晶,因为他一直不敢告诉晶晶。

一天,不知道谁激怒了他,他一早就急忙去跟晶晶表白:“晶晶,我喜欢你,请你嫁给我吧!”晶晶回答说:“你高大威猛,我也很喜欢你。可是,你太脏了。嘴里有很浓的腥味,你得保证你今后不再吃小动物了。”“好的,我这就去洗澡,我会让你嫁给我的。”老虎说完,就回家去了。

老虎回家后,就去了池塘,痛痛快快地洗了个澡。

第二天,他又去找晶晶,对她说:“你看,我已经洗好澡了,也刷好了牙,这回你该嫁给我了吧?”“还不行。”晶晶说,老虎可急了,问:“为什么还不行?”晶晶回答他,说:“你的牙齿太锋利了,我怕你会伤到我的。”“那好,我这就去把牙齿给拔了。我会让你嫁给我的,我坚信。”老虎回到家,找了螃蟹医生,让他把他的牙齿给一颗一颗尖利的牙齿拔掉了。

第三天,老虎又来了,他对晶晶说:“我把牙齿给拔了,这是我用来吃东西的,现在,我为了你把它拔了,你嫁给我吧。”“这还不行,你的爪子也太锋利了,我担心,你会用它来伤害我。”晶晶说,老虎着急了,说:“晶晶,如果我的爪子没了,我怎么捕捉食物?”晶晶双手抱胸,说道:“要么是我,要么是你的爪子,你选一个吧。”“好,我这就去把爪子上的指甲给剪掉。”老虎说。

老虎回家后,叫了龙虾大夫把他的爪子剪掉了。

第四天,老虎又跑到晶晶面前,说:“这回你该嫁给我了吧?”晶晶却拿出一根棍子,说:“老虎,我很欣赏你的信心,可是,你害了我们那么多的同胞,我很恨你。所以。我必须了你,为我的同族报仇!”老虎听后,哈哈大笑,说道:“来吧,我不怕你!如果,我不是老虎,这样我就能娶你了!我希望,我下辈子,可以跟你做朋友。”说完,他闭上眼睛。一群小动物冲出来,要了老虎,晶晶拦住了他们:“不要他,他是个有情有义的男子汉!”老虎却说:“我的牙齿、爪子都没有了,就算你放了我,我又怎么生存呢?”说完,拿起晶晶手上的棍棒,向自己砸去。

从此以后,小动物们又过上了幸福、和平的生活。

动物园作文写作框架【二】

(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.

(2)利弊型的`议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目

______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____ 缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

(3)答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, anotheer way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.

Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a

number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.

(4) 谚语警句性议论文

It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )

A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二_.

Itis not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.

(2)利弊型的议论文

目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题

_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspJust As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides",is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with,To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题

into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.

( 3 答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this pr______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concern

( 4 谚语警句性议论文

语 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our stu. ( also theoretically

______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____ With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语

_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..

★★★图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the _____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases,significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to

show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned,

I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

动物园作文写作框架【三】

我曾经和爸爸、妈妈、哥哥、姐姐一起住在一个美丽的荷塘里,过着幸福的生活。每到夏天,荷叶长得满塘满塘的,像撑开的一张张绿桑那硕大的叶子上,一枝枝荷花亭亭玉立,像娇羞的少女,满脸绯红,微微含笑。我和哥哥、姐姐常在荷叶间追逐游戏,在水中自由自在地潜水嬉戏,累了蹲在荷叶上休息,饿了就捉飞虫吃。这样的日子真快乐!

可是,一天晚上,我在荷塘边散步。忽然,一道刺眼的强光照得我睁不开眼睛,接着一只黑乎乎的大手迅速地把我紧紧捉住,然后,把我扔进一只黑乎乎的麻袋里。我这才知道许多同伴也和我一样被人类抓了。眼看要轮到我了,这时,走来一位漂亮的小姑娘和妈妈,小姑娘小声地对妈妈说:“妈妈,明天美术课要画青蛙,买一只让我观察观察。”妈妈同意了,小姑娘挑啊挑,挑中了我,我顿时舒了一口气,好一阵惊喜,总算逃过一劫。

我茫然地跟小姑娘回到家,不知又会发生什么事。小姑娘 把我放到一个大的玻璃缸中,左看右看,上看下看,足足看了一小时。第二天,小姑娘放学回家,对妈妈说:“妈妈,青蛙是益虫,我们把它放了吧。”于是,小姑娘和妈妈一起把我送到田野里放生。我钻出袋子,深深地吸一口气,外面的空气好新鲜!我深情地望母女俩,一步一回头,庆辛自己没有成为刀下的“冤鬼”,我也感谢可人的小姑娘给我第二次生命。

我又可以自由自在地生活了!但我离开了爸爸、妈妈、哥哥、姐姐是那么的孤单,那么的寂寞!我也不知道,今后的命运又会如何?我要大声疾呼:“请人类多一份爱心,多爱护我们一些吧!请记住,我们是益虫,是保护庄稼的能手!

动物园作文写作框架【四】

“森林里要举行选美比赛啦!”这个好消息一传十,十传百,动物们个个都跃跃欲试,争相报名参赛。

这一天,比赛的日子终于到了!哇,来参赛的动物可真多啊!台上台下是人山人海,一片欢腾。

主持人小鹿姐姐宣布比赛开始。

首先出场的是小白兔。只见它纵身一跃,跳上了舞台,迫不及待地抖抖自己的皮毛,骄傲地说:“看,我的肌肤洁白如玉,我的外套价值连城,无人能比啊。”接着,它又指着自己的眼睛说:“再看,我的这双眼睛红通通的,真是既漂亮又神气!”最后,小白兔又竖起两只耳朵夸赞道:“还有我的耳朵修长而又柔软,可以说是世界上最美的了。”

第二个出场的是大公鸡。它一声鸣叫,飞上了舞台,很不服气地说:“如果要选美,当然要数我了。我不仅长着一身五彩缤纷的羽毛,还戴着一顶鲜红的帽子,特别是拥有世界上最美的歌喉,我还有动物界男高音歌唱家的美称呢。我可比那秃尾巴的兔子美多了。”临下场的时候,它还不忘喔、喔、喔地大叫一声,一展歌喉,着实把动物评委们吓了一大跳。

最后上场的是孔雀。在优美音乐的伴奏下,在七彩灯光的闪烁下,它迈着轻盈的舞步,从后台款款地走上舞台。它什么也不说,只是先微笑着向大家深深地鞠了个躬,然后展示各种开屏的姿势,真是艳丽迷人,直把大家看得眼花缭乱。

最后,评委们一致亮出了本次比赛的最高分——9999分。

孔雀理所当然地获得了冠军。