批改网英语作文范文【一】
动物是人类的好朋友，我就有一个这样的好朋友，它就是可爱的小狗——灰灰。
灰灰的眼睛水汪汪的，鼻子非常灵敏，耳朵大大的，总是向上竖立着，不停地前后动着，好像卫士一样的时刻警惕着周围的一切。身子胖胖的，尾巴总是卷起来。
小狗跑得很快，每天放学我还没有进家门，灰灰就会跑出来向我摇头摆尾地欢迎我。每当来陌生人的时候，它就会汪汪地叫起来，好像在说：“有人来了，有人来了。”
灰灰喜欢吃肉，给它一块肉，它就会叼到一边，两只前爪抱着肉，津津有味地吃着。
我非常喜欢我的小狗——灰灰，它给我带来了无穷的快乐。
批改网英语作文范文【二】
我有一只可爱的小狗，它的名字叫毛毛，它胖胖的，白白的，喜欢吃火腿肠。
有一次，我给它泡了点煎饼和放了些火腿肠，谁知它把火腿肠都吃了，一点煎饼都没吃。还有一次，它饿了，到处找食物，它看见我妈妈的花盆里面有石头，它以为是食物，把石头吃到嘴里了，就听到嗝蹦嗝蹦的响声，最后它把小石子吐出来了，竟然变成了碎石子，小狗可真馋。
小毛毛还特别淘气，喜欢跟着人乱跑。有一次，我带着毛毛在妈妈厂子里玩，一眼没注意，它差点掉进水沟里，多亏我反应快，把它抱到一边去了，救了它一命。还有一次，我去捡石头，没注意它从我的三轮车上掉了下来，可把我吓坏了，我的小狗可真淘气。
我喜欢我的小狗。
批改网英语作文范文【三】
妈妈在市场给我买回三只乌龟。分别是乌龟爸爸，乌龟妈妈，和乌龟女儿。是一个幸福的三口之家。
乌龟爸爸身体强壮，大而坚硬的外壳，深褐色的皮肤，粗壮的四肢，爬起来步伐快而有力。乌龟妈妈身材中的等，不胖也不瘦，浅褐色的皮肤，爬起来步伐轻盈。女儿身型娇小，黑红相间的皮肤，外壳还不太硬，爬起来偶尔身体还要失去平衡。
就在买回来不久的一天，我无意间发现，乌龟爸爸，妈妈沿着盆不住的转圈，小乌龟紧跟身后，过了一会，爸爸停了下来，妈妈也停了下来，小乌龟飞快的爬到了妈妈的背上。妈妈驮着小乌龟爬到了爸爸的背上。哇!原来它们在叠罗汉。这时在最上面的小乌龟伸长着脖子，东瞧瞧西看看，感觉一切都新鲜，表情轻松快乐。
哦!我明白了乌龟爸爸妈妈很疼爱它，小乌龟也象我们小孩一样爱撒娇。它们的生活和我们人类一样充满了爱。
批改网英语作文范文【四】
1、在你的笔下，xx的景致是那么的优美动人，运动是那么的富厚多彩，我也爱你优美的xx。
2、小作者写作思绪清新，形貌生动，文笔优美，牢牢围绕一个“绿”字，按“总分总”的布局，形貌了xx的优美景致。
3、文章借助富厚的想象，运用拟人比喻等修辞伎俩加以刻画，使语言流畅优美，文章生动传神。
4、本文文笔优美，抒怀浓厚，是一曲对童年生存的优美颂歌。作者以抒怀的笔调，浓墨重彩地刻画了xx一角的春夏秋冬四序景致，蜜意地回想了在那边度过的优美童年生存。
5、本文以“总分总”的架构，通过抽取xx中的“大树花卉同砚”等要害要素，“化大为小”地形貌了xx四序美景，层次明白，层次清楚，是一篇很好的写景习作。
6、小作者视察细致，形貌生动细致，加上生动形象的比喻拟人，使人读了有身临其境的感觉，也使作者喜好xx的头脑情感暴露得更为天然充分。
7、作者写出了xx清晨的繁忙和充分，也写出了xx清晨景致的优美，末端处“一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨，在这优美的清晨，我们踏上了人生的旅程”，表达了作者爱惜大好韶光，走好人生之路的优美愿望。
8、全文语言生动准确，情节精美曲折，好像将读者带进了开心乐土，令人眉飞色舞。全文普通易懂，意见意义性强。
9、文章能过清新风趣的语言，形貌了…的事。字里行间，满盈童年真童趣，欢声笑语不停于耳，不失为一篇佳作。详略恰当，虚实相生，是的两大特色，……内容更富厚，重生动。
10、文章开头引人入胜，吸引读者。点面联合，使文章生动，详细，详略恰当。
11、全篇色彩美丽，生机盼望盎然。字里行间，通过xx春夏秋冬的形貌，抒发作者对xx童年生存的热爱。
12、xx四序景致真美，你的习作层次清楚，内容富厚，用词尤为生动准确。
13、你就像一个小画家一样，把你的xx的优美景致逐一给各人绘画出来了，四序差别，景致各别，简短的笔墨流暴露你对xx的热爱之情，做到了景象融会，很棒！
14、作者把写景与抒怀联合起来，寓情于景，景象融会，全笔墨里行间都突出了对xx的无比喜好之情。作者着力刻画了优美无比的喷池塘，绿草如茵的操场，宽敞豁亮的课堂，使一个优美的xx显如今人们眼前目今。
15、xx四序景致真美，你的习作层次清楚，内容富厚，用词尤为生动准确。
16、以景喻情，开头颇有新意；倒叙开头，渲染意境。
17、文章有详有略，言之有序，内容生动详细，不失为一篇佳作。文章内容新鲜，布局公道，流畅连贯，天然通达。细节形貌颇具匠心。极富功底。
18、纵观全篇，文章笔调清新生动，形貌绘声绘色，消息联合，从近处的晨雾写到远处的日出，从空中的'树叶，写到地上的小草，从一棵棵杨树写到自由飞翔的小鸟，层次清楚，层次清楚，读后使人如临其境。
19、文章在字里行间都流暴露对xx的喜好之情，奇妙的运用了动态立体感知，让xx融于一年四序之间，有了时间的拉长，表现出了动态感和活力感，别的小作者不停怀着一颗不停探求未知的心，对知识的渴望，对故国的热爱，让每位读者欣慰。
20、充分运用消息联合的写法，并辅以比喻，拟人等伎俩，通过生动，形象的语言的刻画，使读者好像置身于梦乡一样平常。末端处对人物的称赞，情真意切，动人至深。
21、全文端倪清楚，生动紧凑，意见意义性强。文章边叙事边抒怀。末端处会合表达情绪，既照应开头又总结全文。首尾连贯，趁热打铁。
22、文章开头新鲜，具有先声夺人之效。使读者一晤面就能对人物孕育发生…的印象。文章前后连贯，形成完备的形象。
23、小作者写了本身熟习的地方——学校，把写景与写人奇妙联合起来，景中有人，以景衬人。
24、作者通过形貌本身的xx的景致，可以说是借景抒怀，抒发了本身对学校的爱，语句畅通，中央明白。
25、文章线索清朗，主题突出，牢牢围绕？举行。文章开头与末端时的诗化语言，满盈想象与韵律之美，令人愿读，爱读，不忍释手。
26、作者能按方位次序向读者先容其可爱的xx，从校门——讲授区（讲授楼巨型花坛）——运动区（大操场），层次清楚，有选择有重点地绘景，天然地反应出学校生机发达的氛围。
27、生动详细，让人爱莫能助释手卷。文章蕴藉的末端，既点题，又耐人寻味。
28、细致视察详细事物，并睁开符合的想象，这是的乐成之处。文章融情于景，边绘景边抒怀，善于运用打比喻的伎俩，使文章形象生动。
29、你的作文融情于景，把对xx的热爱融注在字里行间。末了直抒胸臆，表达主旨：“爱xx”，写得很棒！语言优美，大量利用拟人等修辞，形象生动地把xx的四序景致形貌了出来。
30、小作者运用了动点视察的要领对xx晨色举行了生动的形貌，字里行间饱含着小作者对xx对大天然的热爱之情。
批改网英语作文范文【五】
现在疫情当前，为了学生安全，不集聚在一起，我们不能到学校上课，历史上放得最长的一次寒假。为了我们学习，老师在网上直播辅导我们学习。
At present, for the sake of the safety of students, we cant go to school without gathering together. Its the longest winter vacation in history. For our study, the teacher tutored us live online.
为了这次疫情，全国各省各地展开“停课不停学”老师直播上课行动，许多教育机构推出各种学习软件。名师在线免费教学，帮助学生学习，在线辅导。
In order to deal with the epidemic, all provinces and regions across the country launched a live action of "no suspension of classes" for teachers, and many educational institutions launched various learning software. Famous teachers online free teaching, help students learn, online tutoring.
因为上网课直播，各省老师出现了不同的争论。湖南哪吒“对多数学生说，网课的授课效果根本得不到保证，这种形式主义何必存在？”我觉得湖南老师说得不错，上网课，有一部分爱学习的学生能坚持上网课，但是有一部分不自律的同学开着直播就该干嘛干嘛去。所以说上网课不一定得到学习效果。
Because of the live broadcast of online classes, teachers in various provinces have different arguments. Hunan Nezha said to most students that the teaching effect of online courses is not guaranteed at all. Why does this formalism exist I think Hunan teachers are right. In the online class, some students who love learning can insist on the online class, but some students who are not self disciplined can do what they should do when they open the live broadcast. So online classes dont necessarily get learning results.
我个人是觉得上网课没什么学习效果，上网课，老师在线直播辅导各同学，但是人数多，老师又不能每一个人都顾及得到，每个人的问题不一样，只能挑重点讲。一个人在房间里学习，没有在学校教室里学习氛围好。作息时间混乱，晚上熬夜，晚睡觉，预定多个闹钟。早上起来打完卡接着睡。上网课老师不能面对面教导，许多同学都是敷衍了事。老师与同学之间缺乏互动，对于学习好求者可能受益匪浅，但是对于厌倦学习者，学习上没有一点效果，需要老师面对面教导，当面监督学习情况。
Personally, I dont think the online class has any learning effect. The online class and the teachers live online tutoring for each student have a large number of students, but the teacher cant take everyone into consideration. Everyones problems are different, so we can only focus on them. A person in the room to study, not in the school classroom learning atmosphere. The schedule is chaotic. Stay up late, go to bed late, and reserve multiple alarm clocks. Get up in the morning, punch in and go to sleep. Teachers cant teach online lessons face to face, many students are perfunctory. The lack of interaction between teachers and students may benefit those who are good at learning, but for those who are tired of learning, there is no effect in learning. Teachers need to teach face-to-face and supervise learning face to face.
上网课对贫困家庭来说，不方便，有可能老是断网，要是家庭人口多的家庭，孩子都在上网课有可能网络卡。住在农村里的有一些没有信号不好的同学来说也麻烦，不能好好上网课。对上小学的同学们都是没有手机的，父母要出去工作，根本起不到学习作用。
Internet class is inconvenient for poor families. It is possible to always disconnect from the Internet. If there is a family with a large population, it is possible for children to use Internet cards in Internet class. Living in the countryside, some students who dont have a good signal are also in trouble. They cant have a good online class. There is no cell phone for the students in primary school. If parents want to go out to work, they cant learn at all.
学生的专注不在直播上，面对着QQ、微信、游戏、电视的诱惑，有很多学生难以拒绝诱惑，没有吧精力放在上网课上。老师也不知道学生在干什么，人数过多，有的学生一边手机上网课，一边睡觉。或者手机上网课，而学生却在看电视。手机电脑电视对眼睛视力有一定影响，对眼睛不好。
Students focus is not on live broadcast. Facing the temptation of QQ, wechat, games and TV, many students are hard to resist the temptation and have no energy to focus on online classes. Teachers also dont know what students are doing. There are too many students, some of whom are sleeping while taking lessons on the Internet. Or mobile Internet class, while students are watching TV. The mobile phone computer TV has certain influence on the eyesight, but it is not good for the eyes.
所以我觉得，上网课不一定取得到老师授课学习效果，有一些学生未能适应网上学习。学习情况未能得到提升。但是在这个特殊时期，我们现在只能在网上学习了，无论如何，还是希望各位同学们认真上网课，能学一点是一点了。希望学校开学通知早一点来，开始怀念在教室里面学习的日子了。
So I dont think that online classes can achieve the effect of teaching and learning by teachers, and some students cant adapt to online learning. Learning has not been improved. But in this special period, we can only learn online now. In any case, I hope that all the students will take online classes seriously and learn a little bit. I hope that the school notice will come earlier and start to miss the days of studying in the classroom.
批改网英语作文范文【六】
网课，是疫情时美丽的流行；关怀，是生活中永恒的经典。——题记
E-learning is a beautiful epidemic in the epidemic; caring is an eternal classic in life. ——Inscription
疫情的肆虐使今年的寒假出奇地漫长。为了让我们“停课不停学”，老师们都摇身变成了“主播”或线上“客服”。一时间，网课成了美丽的流行，而老师们隔空的帮助让学生觉得这个寒假不太冷。
This years winter vacation is surprisingly long because of the epidemic. In order to let us "stop classes and never stop learning", teachers have become "anchor" or "customer service" online. For a while, online classes became a beautiful fashion, and the teachers help in the gap made students feel that this winter vacation was not too cold.
网课之初，我们学生大部分还可以管控好自己。可“路遥知马力，日久见人心”，有些同学渐渐显示出了本色，私底下约定时间玩游戏、跟同学聊天，甚至忘记了上网课。可是你们知道吗，老师为了让我们“不停学”，费尽了心。
At the beginning of online classes, most of our students were able to control themselves. However, some students have gradually shown their true colors. They have privately arranged time to play games, chat with their classmates, and even forget about online classes. But did you know that the teacher made great efforts to keep us going.
就说我们班的黄老师吧，每天傍晚，都要为我们准备第二天的所有学习任务清单。老师要先把视频课看一遍，如果效果不好，又会继续搜寻，一定要寻找到最好的学习资源，争取不给学生留下一丝漏洞和不好的体验。
Lets say that Mr. Huang in our class prepares a list of all the learning tasks for us every evening. The teacher should watch the video lesson first. If the effect is not good, he will continue to search. He must find the best learning resources to avoid leaving any loopholes and bad experience for the students.
接着随时监督学生的作业完成情况，那一份份电子作业发出去，每一次都收到写55份作业图片。是图片啊，你能想象得到，老师在屏幕上认真批改每个同学作业的情景吗？不仅有勾画圈点，还有批语呀。张同学哪个字写错了，李同学这个句子不通顺，王同学的字迹太潦草……老师都会一一批注，还经常出现鼓励性语言，为同学们加油，而且几乎不重复。
Then monitor the completion of the students homework at any time. When the electronic homework is sent out, 55 pictures of the homework are received each time. Its a picture. Can you imagine that the teacher carefully corrects each students homework on the screen? There are not only sketching circles, but also comments. Whats wrong with Zhang? Lis sentence is not smooth. Wangs handwriting is too scrawly Teachers will annotate one by one, and often use encouraging language to cheer students on, and almost no repetition.
那次小朱同学忘提交作业了，老师便马上用短信提醒，收到作业图片后，又马上批改，并督促订正。面对作业质量差、态度不认真的同学，老师还会进行电话家访。老师还会在百忙之中抽时间解答学生的疑问呢！
That time, Zhu forgot to submit his homework. The teacher immediately reminded him with a text message. After receiving the pictures, he immediately corrected them and urged them to correct them. In the face of the students with poor quality and not serious attitude, the teacher will also make a telephone home visit. The teacher will take time out of his busy schedule to answer the students questions!
那一次，我在学习文言文《掩耳盗铃》时遇到了困惑，便发了一条信息咨询老师。知道老师很忙，根本没指望老师马上能回复。可出乎意料，不到一分钟，竟然收到了老师的回复，回复中不仅有文字，还有查证的图片，最后还附上一段让我信心满怀的鼓励性话语：很高兴你能这么积极主动地钻研，老师为你的发现和大胆质疑叫好。以后学习上遇到有分歧的问题，不要迷信权威，只管大胆求证。为你的探究精神点赞！
That time, when I was learning the classical Chinese "hiding my ears and stealing the bell", I met with confusion and sent an information consultation to the teacher. Knowing that the teacher is very busy, I didnt expect the teacher to reply immediately. But unexpectedly, I received the teachers reply in less than a minute. There were not only words but also verified pictures in the reply. At the end of the reply, I also attached a piece of encouraging words that made me confident and full of confidence: Im glad that you can study so actively, and the teacher applauds your discovery and bold query. In the future, if you encounter different problems in your study, dont believe in authority, just dare to prove it. Praise your spirit of inquiry!
我不知道这次疫情还有多久才能结束，但网课却给我们的学习增添了新时代的快乐，已成为我成长中遇到的最美丽的流行；老师的付出和大爱，让我们的心通过互联网这根神秘的丝线，紧紧地联系在一起，那无微不至的关怀，已成为我生活中永恒的经典。
I dont know how long it will take for the epidemic to end, but online classes have added a new era of happiness to our learning, which has become the most beautiful fashion I have ever met in my growth. The teachers efforts and love have made our hearts closely linked through the mysterious thread of the Internet. That meticulous care has become an eternal classic in my life.
