英语作文天安门五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文天安门五年级【二】
??天安门和天坛公园三年级作文无论是身处学校还是步入社会，大家都经常看到的身影吧，作文根据写作时限的不同可以分为限时作文和非限时作文。写起作文来就毫无头绪？下面是小编精心整理的去天安门和天坛公园三年级作文，供大家参考借鉴，希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。
早上6：00我们去机场，坐7：25的'飞机去北京。海海哥哥和我在飞机上吃了个早餐，玩了一会电脑游戏。10：30飞机降落在首都国际机场。
下午我们去参观天安门。上天安门城楼不允许带水，妈妈和我一起把水喝光。天安门城楼很大，里面摆着过去官员坐的椅子，天花板上画得很漂亮。爸爸妈妈说这里是过去皇帝召见大臣开会的地方，普通人是进不来的。外面可以看多警卫，隔几米就有一个。栏杆很高，爸爸抱起我往天安门广场看，广场上有很多人，有些地方密密麻麻的。广场周边有几个重要的建筑，爸爸说正面是人民英雄纪念碑和纪念堂，右边是人民大会堂，左边是军事博物馆。在城楼上还看到五面国旗迎风飘扬，啪啪作响。
接着我们去了天坛公园。我们进去时发现，里面的景点已经关门了。我们只好在园子里走走看看。我们穿过一条长长的走廊，走廊上有很多人，有人在下棋，有人在跳广场舞，有人在唱歌，还有人在休息。我们看到了天坛塔，很漂亮，但是不能进去。爸爸说跟电视里看到的感觉不一样。我们还穿过一片树林，树林里很多都是柏树，我们在里面拍了很多照片。公园很大，走得我们腿都酸了。
出来后我们每个人喝了一瓶酸奶，然后坐公交车回去。路上特别堵，海海哥哥和我都困得睡着了。
晚上我们去酒店对面的“那家花园餐厅”吃饭。餐厅的环境很好，有一个小花园，很多外国人坐在花园里吃饭。我们选择坐里面，因为里面有空调更凉爽。我们点了三个菜，还点了酸枣汁和啤酒。我们一起碰杯，爸爸妈妈表扬哥哥和我今天很能吃苦。
英语作文天安门五年级【三】
天安门位于中华人民共和国首都北京市区中心，面临长安街。天安门原是明、清两朝皇城的正门，明永乐十八年（公元1420年）建成，当时名叫承天门。清顺治八年（1651年）更名为天安门。1949年10月1日，中华人民共和国在这里举行了开国大典，并被设计入国徽。1961年，天安门被中华人民共和国国务院公布为第一批全国重点文物保护单位之一。另外，叶大鹰导演的一部作品名字也是《天安门》。
我看了一下资料，觉得天安门很好，想我也很想去，我问爸爸妈妈，爸爸妈妈同意了。过了几天我和爸爸妈妈一起坐着车去天安门了，我们在那看升旗仪式，那里人山人海的根本看不见。
然后我们去了人民英雄纪念碑，爸爸给我说：“人民英雄纪念碑位于北京天安门广场中心。1949年9月30日，中国人民政治协商会议第一届全体会议决定，为了纪念在人民解放战争和人民革命中牺牲的人民英雄，在首都北京建立人民英雄纪念碑。当天下午6时，出席中国人民政治协商会议的全体代表，在天安门前广场上举行了建立纪念碑的奠基典礼。后经全国广泛讨论，确定碑型。1961年，人民英雄纪念碑被中华人民共和国国务院公布为第一批全国重点文物保护单位之一。人民英雄纪念碑位于纪念堂以北，是中华人民共和国政府为纪念中国近现代史上的革命烈士而修建的纪念碑”。
最后我们坐着车回到了家。
