中秋节英语作文五年级水平【一】
这一天，月光明媚，月亮高高地挂在天空中，如同天空中镶嵌着一颗透明发亮的明珠。我们一家坐在院子里，静静地看着这害羞的“小姑娘”，不禁吟诵起优美的诗句：“明月几时有，把酒问青天。”就在这感慨万千的时候，奶奶端着一盘香气扑鼻的.月饼来了。我们手拿月饼，小心翼翼地放入嘴中。顿时一股舒畅的感觉席卷全身，一个字，“棒！”外酥里嫩，味道刚刚好。突然，又一首小诗浮现在我的脑海里：小饼如嚼月，中有酥和饴。我风卷残云地吃起了剩下的月饼，连渣都不剩。
吃完了月饼后，我们全家总动员一起来到了大街上，立马就被那些五颜六色的彩灯和前来观灯的人群深深地震撼了。我们也迫不及待地加入了人群之中，淹没在五花八门的花灯的海洋里。这里的彩灯形状、姿态千态百怪：好吃懒做的猪八戒正捧着西瓜，乐呵呵地吃着；孙悟空手拿如意金箍棒，要把这贪吃的呆子痛打一顿；小鱼摇着闪闪发光的大尾巴向我们游来······人们的欢声笑语使气氛变得很热闹。
我抬头仰望天空，这是的月亮更圆、更皎洁了，月光照在我们每个人喜悦的脸上。这个中秋节真令人难忘。
中秋节英语作文五年级水平【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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中秋节英语作文五年级水平【三】
来到爷爷奶奶家时，哇！有二奶奶、二爷爷、三奶奶、三爷爷、老太等人。奶奶见我来了，就喜开颜笑地对我说：“丹丹，你来了呀！你喜欢吃什么呢？我叫你爷爷给你去买的！我一副无所谓的表情，对奶奶说：“随便，无所谓的奶奶便开始追问在起来，说：“世界上可没有随便啊？“奶奶，我真的随便吃什么的，只要是你们给我买的，就是我喜欢吃的！嘻嘻，我先去看电视了！
……
啊！真香！好像是我最爱——红烧鸭！我情不自禁地在心中默默地说了起来，我悄悄地走进了厨房，准备偷吃。妈妈见了，也在我后面观察我的举动。当我快要接近时，“住手！你这个小馋猫。我吓了一大跳，赶紧准备溜出去，可奶奶挡在门口，我心里暗暗的想：俗话说得好：螳螂捕蝉，黄雀在后，我怎么就这么的笨啊！我眼含着泪花，对大人们说，我再也不敢了的，大人们才放过我的。爸爸和爷爷开始忙着把斗香点燃了，又把小桌上放满水果，月饼等食品放在月光下。
我突然想起句“举头望明月，低头思故乡。“小儿不识月，呼作白云盘的诗句，心里颇也能感触到些诗人当时的一点心境……
“开饭了，开饭了！
我直流口水，弟弟也是跟我一副样子。几分钟后，桌上一半的`饭菜已被我和弟弟消灭了（呵呵！也有点夸张了）。爸爸他们都有点被我们的举动惊呆了的。
我拿着椅子坐在月光下，看着那天空燃放的礼花：红的、蓝的、紫的……
一会儿是“五彩蘑菇云向上升腾，一会儿又见晶莹透亮的“小星星向你扑来……
我看了入了迷，仿佛都身临其境般。
天上的明月，中秋夜晚的月色，太美了！那五彩缤纷的烟火，在我的脑海中怎么也挥之不去。
