六年级作文英语写四川【一】
你们好！
当我得知2008年5月12日的下午2点28分，在你们的家乡发生了8.0级的大地震时，我的心就像被心割了似的，痛得不知所措……
那天，我走在回家的路上，听见许多人在议论着四川地震的事儿。我心急如焚，路飞跑回家。打开电视，见到最悲惨的幕：你们的家园变成了废墟，你们的学校倒塌了，马路支离破碎，到处是深深的裂痕……生命的消逝，地的瓦砾无声的抗拒着自然的灾难！和泪交融在起了，我突然懂得了什么叫真正的痛苦，什么叫爱！
同学们，你们记得吗？当时你们的教室里书声琅琅，声音动听极了！连窗外的蝴蝶、蜻蜓，它们都专心的听着呢，切是那么温馨。黑板上的词语才抄了几个，课文还没来得及讲完……这场突如其来的大地震就降临了！让你们经历了生与的考验，让你们幼小的心灵承受了严重的创伤！……
俗话说：一方有难，八方支援。亲爱的.同学们，千万不要气馁，千万不要害怕，祖国各地的人民都早已伸出温暖的手，为你们捐钱捐物，就希望你们早日回到从前那幸福快乐的日子！
大灾无情人有情。这场灾难让我们中国人的心紧紧相连。种不畏艰险、勇于胜利、自强不息的精神，在这场突如其来的特大自然灾害中，体现得淋漓尽致。而个沉着坚毅善打硬仗的四川人民，个团结心众志成城的中国人民，则进行着场坚忍不拔气势如虹的不屈抗争，以种让世人侧目的自强姿态，尽显英雄本色！
为坚强的四川人民喝彩，为祖国千千万万团结心众志成城的中国人民喝彩！希望四川的将来更加美丽繁华！朋友们，希望不久的将来你们能像我们样愉快的学习，工作着！
此致
敬礼
六年级作文英语写四川【二】
你们好！
我是一位来自广东深圳的小学六年级学生。去年的五月十二日一次大地震影响了你们生活，我也同样怀着悲痛的心情，对你们同龄人表示问候。
虽然地震破坏了你们平静的家园，但大家不要灰心丧气，要振奋起来，未来的生活会更美好！
如果你们愿意，我们愿意资助你们来我们深圳走一走。这里的人都很好。我会带你们去世界上最大的.模型公园——锦绣中华，在那里你们可以观看到全国各地的名胜古迹，为我们大中华而骄傲！我会带你们去世界之窗，领略外国风情的魅力。我还会带你们登高望远，下海游泳，让你们开心放松。
灾区的同学们，你们要坚强。我们中国神州大地，亿万人民，都会帮助你们。你们是祖国的花朵，未来的栋梁。要让你们美好的四川成为祖国最棒的！俗话说得好：不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹！
其实，我心底也有一个心愿：去四川看一看!我一直没有去过那儿.听说四川环境好,人也好,振兴家园绝对没问题!在你们的回信里,不要忘了给我介绍介绍哦！我还从电视里了解到，如今的四川人个个都在充满信心地建设家园！我真的很佩服你们对生活的信心！
大家别忘了快快给我回信哦！我代表深圳的小学生给你们捐款100元！这钱虽少，但可以表达我们的心意。
祝你们幸福、健康、尽早建好家园！
一位深圳的小学生
二零XX年三月二十一日
六年级作文英语写四川【三】
你们还好吗？
我知道，汶川发生了8．0级的大地震，这场空前绝后的灾难，带走了你们中一些人的亲人，坍塌了你们的家园，或许，看到我这封信时，你们正在垂泪，正在伤心，那么，请先读完我这封信吧。
你们正在承受灾难，很多人被深深的埋在在废墟下，无法与我们联络、交流，但祖国母亲没有忘记你们，世界人民没有忘记你们，我们更没有忘记你们！我们是同胞啊！同胞……
你们身处在水深火热之中，但此刻身处700多公里以外的'我们，心同样处在水深火热之中。它在为你们而焦虑，它在为你们而担心，它在一遍遍地呼唤着你们，祖国母亲也在一声声地呼唤你们，你们听到了吗？
你们知道吗？我们与时间，与生展开了殊搏斗：我们在不断地加快救援速度，看看是时间快还是我们更快，我们能不能在最短的时间里救出更多的人；我们在不断地抢救在生边缘徘徊的人，看看是神厉害还是我们更厉害，我们能不能从神手中夺回一条条鲜活的生命！
这不是一声“一方有难，八方支援”的呼吁可以诉尽的情谊，我们在用实际行动，用最真挚的援助之心拯救你们于水火之中。
一个又一个鲜红的募捐箱啊，承载了多少问候与关切！为了献而排成长龙等候的人们，只是期盼着能为你们尽一份自己的绵薄之力，这一刻，我们脉相连！
一百多个小时的生命奇迹，是我们坚持不懈的努力创造的。在灾难面前，团结一心的中华儿女用热与信念谱写了一曲生命的壮歌！
你们未来的路还很长，你们依然可以读书，学习，正常生活。所以，你们一定要乐观，坚强！
我们每个人都在努力，所以你们更不能放弃！或许你们失去了亲人，或许你们失去了家园，但你们还有祖国啊，你们还有生命啊！如果你们的家人在天有灵，也一定会希望你们能过得很好。所以，为了你们自己，为了你们已故的亲人，更为了让我们这些素不相识的亲人安心，你们不能放弃！
祝： 身体健康 万事如意
六年级作文英语写四川【四】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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六年级作文英语写四川【五】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
