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中考写不来英语作文怎么办(初三英语作文零基础怎么补救)

中考写不来英语作文怎么办(初三英语作文零基础怎么补救)

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中考写不来英语作文怎么办(初三英语作文零基础怎么补救)

中考写不来英语作文怎么办【一】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

中考写不来英语作文怎么办【二】

导入:

第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题

Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧

正文:

第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点

Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由

第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由

结论:

第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ

中考写不来英语作文怎么办【三】

I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.

中考写不来英语作文怎么办【四】

过了几天,四位来到街头卖唱,妇人和萨那也来凑热闹,萨那二话没说就拿出自己所有的钱要给它们,却被妇人拦住了:“孩子,这种事我见多了,我们就是太善良,才被它们骗了。”她把萨那的钱装进了自己的腰包。猫咪气不过,眼睛都冒出了火,恨不得把她的嘴抓烂,狗大哥拦住了它说:“稍安勿躁,好戏还在后头,如果你就这么冲上去,咱的身份可就暴露了。”猫咪只好一忍再忍。妇人起身就走,音乐家们偷偷紧跟在后面,直到妇人的家里。四位音乐家并没有走,而是在屋外过夜,直到第二天妇人去工作,萨那去上学。

驴子闯进屋子:“兄弟们,布置陷阱,好好教训教训那个恶毒的女人,哦不,是恶毒的妇人。”驴子锯掉了妇人的床腿,把锯下的腿立在床下,假装安然无恙。猫咪把屋里所有的老鼠抓了起来,全部放在妇人的床铺下面。狗大哥把床面咬断,在床面下安上了弹簧。公鸡录下了自己的叫声,并安了一个机关。四位躲在床后看好戏。

下午夫人下班了,他刚一进门就猜中了公鸡的机关,公鸡开始鸣叫,妇人吓了一跳,一屁股坐在了床上,床腿受不了压力,断了。接着,老鼠“吱吱”的从被铺里跑了出来,吓得妇人撞破了头,昏了过去。萨那回来了,他叫醒了妇人,妇人让他把自己的床铺收拾干净,连老鼠味都不能留下,自己却坐在椅子上呼呼大睡。萨那收拾好之后,把自己的床铺放在妇人的床上。妇人醒了:“儿子,去,把你身上的`老鼠味洗干净。”萨那听他的话,乖乖去了。妇人却跳上了床,她的床面已断,承受不了压力。弹簧把这恶毒的妇人弹了出去,弹到了窗外的小河里,夫人被淹了。音乐家们看了咯咯笑。萨那洗完澡出来,找不到自己的妈妈,四位看他怪可怜,就让他加入自己的音乐队中,从此他们快快乐乐的生活着,再也没有人打扰过。

中考写不来英语作文怎么办【五】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:

第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法

结论:

第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法

中考写不来英语作文怎么办【六】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

中考写不来英语作文怎么办【七】

导入:

第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下

正文:

第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的`理由

结论:

第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构