五年级英语作文去了哪里旅游【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文去了哪里旅游【二】
立春早已过了，可春雨却姗姗来迟。细雨蒙蒙，滋润着休息了一冬的花草；微风徐徐，吹醒了还在梦中的小生灵。
你看！草坪上，小草伸出了头，懒洋洋的，似乎还在梦中遨游，有几丝不情愿。桃园里，桃树冒出了粉红色的花苞，花苞太多紧闭着，也许正在准备挑一个好日子百花齐放呢；性急的却等不及了，独自盛开在枝头，引得众人瞩目，出尽风头。河边，柳树上点缀着无数的新叶，弯弯曲曲地垂下头来，如少女般柔顺的'长发。微风一吹，它们尽情的舞动，似乎在炫耀春姑娘对它们的钟爱。此时，我不禁想起了古人的诗句：“碧玉妆成一树高，万条垂下绿丝涤。不知细叶谁裁出，二月春风似剪刀。是啊！温暖的春风把柳叶吹出，多么像神奇灵巧的剪刀！
春风像慈母般的手抚摸着大地，小草被春风吹得翩翩起舞，好看及了，小动物也被春风吹得浑身舒服。
仰望天空，已有南归的燕子也来凑热闹了！伶俐的小燕子扇动着俊俏轻快的翅膀，翘着剪刀似的小尾巴从很远的地方飞来了，好像是在告诉我们：“春天来了，春天来了！
春天的确来了，不是吗？太阳照着大地，照在人们的身上，暖和极了。微风轻轻吹拂，让人感到那么舒服，那么高兴。
啊！春天，你不像冬天那样寒冷，也不像夏天那样炎热。古人云：一年之计在于春。在这个充满希望，快乐的季节里，作为祖国花朵的我们，将会紧随春天的脚步，开得更鲜艳，更灿烂！
五年级英语作文去了哪里旅游【三】
有一天,我醒来发现自己在宇宙飞船上。我第一件事就是去看一下驾驶位有没有人？我第一眼看到驾驶位没有人，我赶忙上去查看，还好是自动驾驶，这时，飞船到达目的地降落了。
我走出飞船看了看，看外表，这里是金星，我穿着宇航服，这里很热，我想把宇航服脱掉，可又怕这里没有氧气，所以我还是忍耐着热穿着宇航服行走。
我在这走着走着，这里地形很像地球，我都有点怀疑这一个地球，我继续往前看走，这里有很多生物都是未知的，突然旁边的草丛有异样，我上去查看，蹦出了两个身形古怪的人，我害怕极了，生怕他们伤害我，我上前打招呼：“你......你好。”他们回我：“歪比歪比，歪比巴卜。”我完全就听不懂，只好学他们说话。
他们摆了个手势，好像叫我跟着他们，我只好服从，我趁他们不注意的时候，溜走了，我往飞船的方向跑，可是旁边又出现一个庞然大物，那个庞然大物张开嘴往我这跑，好像要把我吃了，我喊着：“救命啊！”
我突然从床上惊醒，看了看自己的身体，我还活着。
我醒来看了看时间还早，于是我继续睡了下去，我想到刚才的那梦，那两个外星人突然出现救了我。他们两个带着我来到了一座科技城。这座科技城，不知道领先了地球多少年的科技。
他们把我带到他们的司令官面前，那司令官还是说着一些我听不懂的话，但我隐约听到我能回到地球，听完他们司令官讲的话，那两个人把我带出了这座城，好像说我能走了。
我警惕的往飞船的方向走去，生怕哪里又出现了什么生物？我左顾右盼，又感觉后面有人，往后一看，却什么都没有。到了飞船前，我检查了下，周围总算没有什么异常，我上了飞船。打开自动导航，和飞船突然撞得很激烈，我在飞船里摇来摇去的。
我睁开眼发现原来是妈妈在叫我，我一看时间，快迟到了，我飞奔出家门......
