五年级英语作文庐山【一】
一个酷热难耐的暑假，妈妈提出了一个宝贵的意见：去庐山玩几天。正好，作业带给我的痛苦可减轻许多。
第二天中午，我就和妈妈报了一个行走路程不多的，因为本人比较累，作业把我们的暑假折磨的只剩20天了。那就意味着我们又要回到那快乐的校园，与老师们见面了。事不宜迟，我们第三天就跳上大巴车，奔向目的地，我一路上吃着可口的薯片，看着窗外的青山碧水，赞叹之余，我又在心里感慨，这里竟有这么美丽的地方，我们住的大都市公路上，有白的，红的，黑的.像小蚂蚁一样的车子，而这里山水环绕，真是人间仙境啊！我想着想着，便进入了梦乡。
一觉醒来发现我们已在了一个壮观的酒店门口。走进大厅，我又赞叹了一番。第二天我们便上山，在车上睡了两个小时，所以一点困意也没有……
第二天，我顶着一双熊猫眼上了山。可是天有不测风云，居然下起了毛毛雨，便使上山的台阶更难走了。可是在雨中的庐山更加美丽。美丽的风景让我走了神，一不小心脚一滑，扑倒在了路上，我害怕极了，因为右边就是万丈深渊，我赶紧爬了起来。到了山顶，我看见了别的山峰都在我之下，还真有一种一览众山小的感觉。一阵阵微风吹过，我快乐极了，我回到酒店就把这些东西记了下来。
第二天我们去参观了仙人洞，其实就是在一个山洞里放几座石像。可是有一个传说，说这个山洞是有一个仙人，在这里定住。这个山洞四通八达，可是里面黑暗无比，我没有进去。
我们还去参观了三叠泉，泉水从山上流下，经过了三个叠弯之后落了下来，有数百米高，怪不得李白写出了名诗飞流直下三千尺，疑是银河落九天。李白就是因为这个才写出了名诗，从此三叠泉便火遍全国。看来只要善于观察，什么都可以写得很美。
第三天我们去参观了五老峰，那山峰为什么是白色的？原来石头和别的山峰不一样，那白色的全是石头，不长树木，所以有白色。在小雨中，五老峰像一个老爷爷，看着来往的游客。我们登上山顶，临风远眺，几座墨绿的小山，好像很仰慕五老峰似的。
第四天我们就要告别庐山，我们去漂了一次流。
我们被别人的船碰了一边，我便用水枪开始反击，别人落荒而逃。玩够了，我们便坐着船开始了快乐的时光，我们顺流而下，一路眺望。
啊！庐山，我爱你。
五年级英语作文庐山【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文庐山【三】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
五年级英语作文庐山【四】
傍晚，我们来到九江，姑姑对我说：“我们今天先休息吧，明天我们去庐山。”我怀着期待的心情进入了甜美的梦乡。
第二天，我们来到庐山脚下，坐着汽车一直到山顶，啊，优美逶迤的山岭，蜿蜒盘旋，犹如一条正在酣睡的巨龙。俯瞰足下，白云迷漫，云雾缭绕，一个个山顶探出云雾外，似朵朵芙蓉出水，美丽极了。正当我们想到对面山头去的时候，缆车过来了，我们坐在缆车上，看见这山真陡啊，好像被刀劈斧削一般！苍翠的山群重重叠叠，像波浪起伏的大海一样，雄伟壮观。
导游带着我们来到漂流的地方，我看见溪水顺着弯弯曲曲的'山谷流下来，我们坐上一艘皮艇，皮艇先在一个在大池子中划来划去。忽然，一道闸门打开，一个长钩子把我的皮艇钩到闸门口，我吓得赶紧闭上眼睛，激流把我们冲了下去。“砰”的一声，我的心还悬在半空中，我们的皮艇却落在了一个大池子中，又一个长钩子把我们的皮艇钩到了闸门口，我吸取上次的经验，勇敢地把眼睛睁开，“哇，好惊险，好刺激呀！”我开心地跟姑姑说。
坐在回家的路上，看着远处重重叠叠，连绵不断的山峰，我和姑姑心情愉快地聊着。我边聊边想：要是爸爸妈妈也能来的话，他们就能看到这美丽的风景了。
五年级英语作文庐山【五】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
