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2023中考南宁英语作文(2023年广西中考英语满分作文)

2023中考南宁英语作文(2023年广西中考英语满分作文)

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2023中考南宁英语作文(2023年广西中考英语满分作文)

2023中考南宁英语作文【一】

南宁的树木很美。从高处往下望,碧绿的树木到处都是。民族大道上有各种树木,有市树扁桃,有从南亚进口的棕榈树,有独木成林的榕树,还有木棉树、假槟榔、大王椰、玉兰树等也长得格外美。大大小小的广场分布在南宁市中,广场上也有像啤酒瓶的棕榈树。

南宁的夜景灯光很美,民族广场上那迷人的.灯光十分美丽,从国外进口的灯柱,一排排,一列列,射出五彩的光芒。椰树灯艳丽无比,有红色的,有黄色的,有青色的,还有蓝色的。南湖桥头有一个帆船灯,象征着一帆风顺,万事如意。南湖桥上有两排整齐的绣球灯,这绣球灯工艺精致,十分美丽,这绣球灯让我想起了刘三姐的故乡

南宁的街道更美,纵横交错,形成了交通网,有刚建成的快速环道,有柏油马路,有水泥路,还有五光十色的砖铺成的人行道顺便告诉你们,邕江五桥——永和桥,邕江六桥——林铁桥,邕江七桥——葫芦顶桥已经都在建了。所以在下班高峰期也不会堵车。

南宁是一座有1680多年的历史的古城。我爱南宁这座古城。

2023中考南宁英语作文【二】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。