五年级英语作文动物园简单【一】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语作文动物园简单【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文动物园简单【三】
上午9点整，我们准时到达了动物园，首先，我们先去了儿童乐园。我玩了摩天轮、过山车、奇妙的路程，沿着小路一直往前走，两旁的树叶被微风吹的”“沙沙”做响，好像在对我们说：“广州动物园欢迎你们的到来。”
到达了长颈鹿的展区，看到好多人在喂长颈鹿，前面的牌子上写着：“喂长颈鹿50元/次”，我以百米冲刺的速度向爸爸妈妈飞奔而去，可怜的望着爸爸妈妈，我那可亲可敬的爸爸，似乎马上心领神会，从口袋抽出一张百元大钞，并对我说：“拿着，去吧！”我兴高采烈地向长颈鹿喂食区飞奔而去。长颈鹿们看到了我手里拽着它们的美好食物—绿油油的树枝数根，便都缓缓地向我走过来，它们踮着它们的长腿，伸着它们标志性的长脖子，低头啃食我手里的食物。它们吃起东西的样子真的是急切又斯文，尽管都很饿，可是它们很懂得互相谦让，大的`长颈鹿总是让着那些小长颈鹿，在它们咀嚼的空隙时才会主动来啃食我手里的树叶。它们真的是一群很有爱心并懂得互相谦让的可爱动物。
绿荫小道一直走，我们又来到了百兽乐园，我一眼就被一匹非常巨大又强壮的骆驼吸引住了，骆驼全身的金黄色松软的驼毛在阳光的照射下显得更加灿烂夺目。我看着这匹可爱的骆驼久久不肯离去，妈妈这回也心领神会了，摸摸我的头，说：“宝贝，妈妈知道你很想骑到它身上走走，你去吧。”
“耶！”我立即兴奋地跳起来。骆驼的主人让我爬上一个十几个阶梯的楼梯，随即把骆驼牵过来楼梯旁边，主人嘱咐我踩者着骆驼身边的踏板上了骆驼最中间的驼峰凹陷。“哇，好高啊！”我心里暗自一惊并有些害怕。骆驼缓缓地往前“啪啪啪”迈步，没走一步，仿佛“地动山摇”，真是“骆驼走一步，地球抖三抖”啊！我控制不住“啊啊啊……”地尖叫起来。突然，我发现所有的人都用诧异的目光看着我，我的脸扑通一下红了，赶紧把头低下去。慢慢的，随着骆驼缓缓的步伐，看着它金灿灿的毛发，感受着它松软的毛发，我的恐惧感渐渐消除，并开始享受着这一切。可是，时间过得真快啊，我恋恋不舍地从骆驼背上下来，慢慢抚摩着它干净的毛发，一步三回头地和它道再见。
物园的一天，真是寒假里最开心的一天，可爱的动物们，以后，我还会经常来看你们的。
五年级英语作文动物园简单【四】
那天，阳光明媚，我怀着喜悦的心情来到了动物园。还未进入动物园，却已发现外面早已是人山人海，到了里面，我们沿着小路来到可爱的大熊猫面前。
熊猫有几分像熊，也有几分像猫，怪不得我们都叫它熊猫。胖胖的身体，肥肥的四肢，最有趣的是它那特大号的墨镜，当时我想：可能是因为熊猫经常熬夜，所以才出的黑眼圈吧！熊猫的毛非常的细滑，毛茸茸的耳朵不时的伸缩，好像在倾听我们说话一样。看着熊猫憨态可掬的样子，不是地觉得它很搞笑，但仔细一看又觉得它十分地可爱，怪不得它是我们的国宝呢！熊猫吃竹子是，现是紧紧的'抓住，好像生怕有人要抢了它的似的。接着它左一口，右一口，吃得津津有味。不愧是一个吃货啊！
看过了可爱的大熊猫。，我们又来到调皮捣蛋的猴子面前。猴子的外形十分有趣，一张桃子形的面孔上，嵌着两颗闪着金光的眼睛在不时的打着转，好像在想什么鬼点子似的，那小小的鼻子，但鼻孔却很大，大大的鼻子下面有一张尖尖的嘴巴。看着可爱极了！看它活动的时候又蹦又跳，有和小伙伴追逐打闹的情形你就知道它平时是多么的顽皮了。但猴子也是十分聪明的。要不然也不会有这么多的鬼点子了。
看完了调皮可爱的猴子，我们又来到了凶猛的老虎面前。老虎可不像猴子那样调皮，也不像大熊猫那样可爱。老虎，有着大大的眼睛，发达的四肢，强健体魄以及惊人的速度。老虎头上烙有天然的王字，嘴上的胡子翘的老高，令人胆寒的炯炯有神的双眼不停的向四周张望，它身上金黄，还有一道道的黑色的斑纹，看上去，十分地凶猛可怕。虽然它被关在铁笼子里，但它依然是一个威风凛凛的大王。
看完了令人胆寒的老虎，我们又去看了高高的长颈鹿，还有可爱的金鱼，美丽的孔雀······
这次的动物园一日游给我的印象最为深刻，那里的动物，仅很可爱，有的还很调皮。我觉得动物园就是一个美丽的大森林。
