英语作文批注【一】
It was a sunlit and enchanting scene of spring morning, when the teachers took us students of Grade 2 to go on our first spring outing. We set off at seven oclock from school. In the warm spring breeze, we were walking there together.
Fifty minutes later, we got to the destination. There, we were going to have a picnic. Some of us cooked rice, some cooked dishes, and some cooked soup. My deskmate, Guo Yunfeng, and I fried eggs. At first, we poured some oil in the pot. When the oil was hot enough, we put the egg into the pot. Soon after that, we turned it over. We were in threes or fours, and we were all bustling with our own tasks.
Times up! The meal was ready. Lets enjoy to our hearts content. Bottoms up!
英语作文批注【二】
Spring in March, accompanied by the comfortable weather and warm sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday. We went to Renmin Park hold some activities and all of my classmates were so excited that they looked like the birds just coming out from birdcage.
We playing games, boating, and fishing there. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring. Some people in the park also joined us and had fun. We had a happy day and the relationship of classmates were getting closer.
英语作文批注【三】
暑假即将来临。
你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。
请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。
注意：1.短文必须写在答题卡的指定区域，词数80——120（不含已写好部分）。
2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表达。
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4．参考词汇：眼界——horizon（或view）
One possible version：
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
英语作文批注【四】
人们都说父爱如山，但那一次，我深深地体会到了父亲细致的爱。——题记
自从进入初中，就大考小考不断，而我因为前几次考试名列前茅，就开始有些沾沾自喜，对待学习再无从前的认真了。于是之后的一次考试，我的成绩一落千丈，我一下子掉进了一个无尽的深渊里，无法自拔。
当时妈妈听到了这个消息，只是不住的叹气，可是爸爸的反映却很强烈，他气得摔门而出。我躲在自己的房间里哭泣，心里懊悔不已，同时心里也在为爸爸的过激行为而生气。
就在妈妈和我一起分析原因的时候，爸爸一直没有回家，那时的我，固执地认为他不是我的亲爸爸，我不想要这样的爸爸。几天之后，爸爸风尘仆仆地回来了，手里多了一个复读机。
后来我听妈妈说，爸爸本来去了新乡，只是因为我的英语学的不好，想去买一个复读机回来，在新乡没有合适的，便转去了郑州，这样的麻烦，只是为了给我买一个质量好的复读机。那一刻，我追悔莫及，原来爸爸出去几天，都是为了我，我后悔没有好好学习，后悔不该这样埋怨爸爸……那一刻，我心里毫无恨意，有的只是无尽的感动。
之后的几天，爸爸一改往日大大咧咧、不拘小节的性格，开始帮我分析错题原因，制定学习计划，告诉我以后要怎么做。爸爸这时做什么都十分细心、无微不至，他的爱在那时也毫无保留地体现出来。从此以后，我又恢复了以往的认真，开始一心一意地对待学习，因为我不能辜负爸爸妈妈的苦心。
现在的爸爸，还和以前一样，懒懒散散，不拘小节，并很少表达他对我的爱。但爸爸那细致入微的爱，无须言表，尤在我心。
批注：这是一篇写人叙事的散文，情感真挚，人物形象突出，活灵活现。采用了顺叙，叙事条理，娓娓道来。在一次不经意间，体会到了父爱的无微不至。过渡自然，先后有序。
英语作文批注【五】
Every year, with the coming of spring, the weather will get warmer. And we usually have a spring outing at this time of the year.
Because of the warm and pleasant days, many people would like to go for an outing. I still remember one of my spring outings, for it was a very interesting experience. It was a bright and cheerful morning. I made a decision to visit a famous mountain near our campus. I went along with some of my schoolmates. We were singing and laughing all the way. There was a large piece of green grass land at the mountain foot. When we were climbing, we could see many beautiful flowers on the mountainside. The mountain was very high ,but we reached its top at last. There, we visited a temple and had a talk with a monk. He told us something about the history of the temple and we got to know about Sakyamuni, the founder of Buddhism. From the mountain top, we could get a birds-eye view of our campus. It seemed very small.
When it was getting dark we returned. Although we were very tired at night, we were too excited to go to sleep.
Comes spring! Lets have an outing!
英语作文批注【六】
Many students are going spring outing.Some students are boating.And some students are having a picnic. The others are playing games. There is a girl siting on a chair reading a book.The sky is blue. The trees are green. The flowers are red.Its a very beautiful park What is the most popular gift for Mothers Day?
Cards, flowers and food are the most popular Mothers Day gifts this year. Eight out of 10 Americans celebrate Mothers Day and spend nearly $$100 on average.
英语作文批注【七】
Many children are always looking forward to the winter vacation; This is because during the vacation, children needn’t go to school; They can do everything they like,such as playing, watching TV, traveling, or even sleeping all the day and so on.and when winter vacation come on ,It means that spring festival will come on soon.
I spent the whole day at home nearly every day, I played with my computer .I played computer games and surved the Internet. during the vacation I,I still stayed in touch with my classmates and my friends.I thinked I hasve been a potatoes mouse .
Even though my vacation wasn’t crazy and exciting, but I really learnt a lot. It was good for relaxing, and I am getting ready for the coming new term now. Good-bye, my winter vacation.
英语作文批注【八】
假如你在一间书店(该书店卖各种杂志和书籍里打工，书店的老板是一个英国人。
每天很少顾客光顾，书店老板请你提出一些吸引顾客的建议。
注意：1、用英语表达，词数：120字左右。
2、可以编写对话或使用其他叙述方式。
One possible version：
them with interesting magazines and books．a poster outside announcing subjects of interest，such as music，films，video，football and so on．a special introductory price for first—time customers．Once they have come into the shop they will then see the other attractions．
where they can trade old books for new ones at a special price．in the shop where books and magazines interesting to them are on show．Invite them to come and sit in the comfortable chairs provided to meet their friends and look through books and magazines．
