济南春天英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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济南春天英语作文五年级【二】
星期四，刘老师对我们说：“下周星期二，我们要去三圣乡郊游，请大家带上干粮、玩具和书……”我们可高兴呀！有的小朋友蹦蹦跳跳，有的小朋友大声地叫着：“太好了！太好了！”还有的小朋友已经在计划怎样自由组合分对呢！我真希望下周星期二赶快到来！
一天又一天地过去了，终于到了星期一的晚上，想着明天要去郊游，我躺在床上翻来覆去，可就是睡不着……
星期二的早上，天气很暖和，我背着书包急急忙忙地来到了学校。过了一会儿，同学们都高高兴兴地上了车，一路上，我们有说有笑，一会儿唱歌，一会儿猜谜语，一会儿又看窗外的风景……
不久，我们就到了目的地。我看见了许许多多、五颜六色的鲜花。听领队阿姨说，有一种花的名字叫“三色堇”，也就是我们常见的“蝴蝶花”，我看见它们的花瓣上长满了美丽的花纹和大小、形状各异的斑点，它们的颜色绚丽多彩，有黄色、桔红色和紫色。它们真的就像一只只蝴蝶在翩翩起舞。咦！那里金光闪闪，是什么呢？走近一看，结果是铺满一地的“金盏菊”，这是菊花中的一种，有的是淡黄色，有的是金黄色，它们的花瓣又小又多，排得密密麻麻，它们扬起一张张的笑脸，对太阳公公说：“谢谢您送给我们了温暖，才让我们长得这样千姿百态！”突然，我看见了四个大菠萝，我的口水都快流出来了，真想咬它几口，原来这是一棵铁树的茎，它的叶子很大又很多，上面长满了刺，可扎人了。这里的花数不胜数，不信，你们就到这里来看一看吧！
今天，我觉得最高兴的事情是：种树。领队阿姨说：“现在让我们种树吧！”首先，我到那边拿了一个花盆，接着把花盆装上土，不过在中间要掏一个小洞，然后到另一个阿姨那儿领一棵小树苗，把它放进花盆中间的小洞里，最后我轻轻地培了土，浇了水，就这样，我的小树苗就种好了。这时候，其他的小朋友也种好了小树苗，看着它们嫩绿的叶子，随风摇曳的枝干，我希望：小树苗在成长中快快乐乐！赶快长成一棵棵通天大树！
这次郊游是我过得最高兴的一天！
济南春天英语作文五年级【三】
在各种花草树木中最受人称赞的莫过于松、柏、梅、竹了。在古往今来的文艺作品的长河中，盛赞松、柏、梅、竹的可谓比比皆是，连篇累牍。人们称赞它们的高风亮节，称赞它们的品格丰厚，称赞它们的高雅清逸，称赞它们的飒爽英姿。这一切的一切像是使它们成了真、善、美的化身!之所以如此，无非因为这些花木能傲霜凌雪，不畏严寒，正如孔老夫子所言：“岁寒然后知松柏之后调也!”我在感悟松、柏、梅、竹高格美德之余，却想到了另一种花木，这就是冬青!
平平凡凡毫不起眼的冬青，其高调之高，比之松、柏、梅、竹简直是有过之而无不及。当万木凋零的严冬，冬青与松、柏、梅、竹一样，傲雪挺立，不折不屈，青绿依旧，在寂冷荒漠中显得格外挺拔，格外秀发 ，给人们的生活点缀上片片春意，给人们的心灵带来无限温馨。
松、柏、梅、竹在文人学士笔下，虽然极尽了称颂，但多是称赞其“孤高”“清奇”，好像是“曲高和寡，”只能与隐士高人为伴，超然于尘世之外。冬青则不然，它生活在平原旷野，广大城乡，与亿万百姓为伴，融入了平凡生活之中。在农家小院，种上一排冬青，不仅平添了几分春意，而且作为绿色的篱笆可以代替砖墙土垣，在城市，排排冬青，整齐地并在一起，筑起碧绿草地的屏障，使稚嫩的小草免受践踏;在机关学校，成排的冬青伫立在行道两旁，像哨兵一样，天天向人们致敬，有的冬青被人们剪修成圆球，硕大的绿球组成美丽的图案，供人玩赏。好啊，冬青!甘处平凡而从不招摇，可以说它有松柏之实而从不争其名，它有梅竹之风而从不夸其节，它体现的是平凡美，和谐美，大众美。
令我百思不得其解的是，冬青的如此节操，真善美集于一身，但是在历史文人学士的笔下，为什么从不提及?清代著名文人李渔在其书中偶然谈及此事，也感到忿忿不平，而且倡言要把冬青改名为：“不为人知树”。我忽然悟道，这“不为人知”不是更高层次的品格吗?孔夫子说：“人不知而不愠，不亦君子乎?”诚然松、柏、梅、竹是文人，是隐士，而冬青才是值得称道的君子。
我赞美冬青!
济南春天英语作文五年级【四】
站在桃花树下，听着春的语言，用心灵来感受春的美妙。耳边时不时传来蜜蜂嗡嗡的声音，鼻间还有桃花的香味，淡淡的……闭上眼睛，虽然看不到眼前的美景，但心灵的眼睛让我看到了春天的美丽，在这里。
手指轻轻抚摸着桃花，花瓣上还有几滴露珠。桃花的花瓣很薄，摸着十分柔软，玫红色的桃花的层次很多，一层一层的。从远处看玫红色的桃花还有点像梅花呢！从近处看玫红色的桃花开放得又大又多，仿佛在比谁开的美，谁看着大呢！刹时间我感觉桃花可媲美牡丹了。
粉色的桃花，有的只有五片花瓣，有的却是多层花瓣。有的桃花的颜色非常非常的浅，浅的几乎跟白色差不多了。当风吹过时，桃花随风飘舞，有一小部分落在了地上，有的落在了草丛里，一眼望去，落在地上的花瓣像给大地铺上了一层粉色的地毯。落在草地里的花瓣，跟小草融为一体，不仔细看，根本看不出来那是桃花的花瓣。
有一种不知名的小花，比米粒还小，如果不仔细观察，兴许还看不到呢！那种小花只有四片花瓣，花瓣的.颜色是紫色的，只有两个花蕾。虽然平凡，但依然绽放着最美丽的笑容。
我们还发现了细米菜，细米菜长得很高，它的叶子神似爱心，花是白色的。我采集的细米菜的花还没有完全开放，还只是一个小花苞，像一个小小的灯笼，可爱极了！还有许许多多叫不上名的野花野草，虽然很难被人注意到，但它们用自己顽强的生命点缀着大地，为春天添上了不一样的色彩……
其实什么地方都有春的踪影，只要你用心观察，会发现春无所不在。
