我爱济南英语作文五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我爱济南英语作文五年级【二】
我爱秋天，因为它不仅是收获的季节，也是忙碌的季节。
路边的大树下，是什么进进出出，忙个不停？原来是蚂蚁。它们排成两列队伍，朝一大块水果“进军”。它们每个用尖尖的牙咬下一块，搬回去。慢慢地，说过被搬完了。它们又去寻找心的目标，准备过冬的粮食。
食品店边上，是什么叽叽喳喳，跳来跳去？原来是麻雀。它们低着小小的头，用两条小腿灵活地跳着。一边跳，一边用黄色的小嘴啄着饼干渣。它们的肚子圆滚滚的，可是还在吃。
公园里面，是什么藏藏躲躲，来回转圈？原来是松鼠。它们一会儿跳上松树，一会又蹿下来，怀里抱着一堆松果。一会儿，又把松果藏了起来。它不停地忙来忙去，没有一刻闲工夫。
秋天里，落叶告诉人们，一年的结束即将来临。在迟来的晨光中，上班的人们脚步越发急促；早到的黑夜中，在办公楼中纷纷亮着灯光，未下班的人们匆匆地筹划一年的总结和明年的规划。而我们要赶快学完心课，复习功课，迎接考试。在正午，爷爷、奶奶们带着小朋友在外面晒太阳，珍惜一年中最后的温暖阳光。
我爱秋天。大家都在忙碌着。我们都在和时间赛跑。秋天让我懂得了要珍惜时间，珍惜生活。
我爱济南英语作文五年级【三】
冬天当然是冷的，而且往往和雪连在一块儿。一觉起来突然看见窗外银装素裹，这种意料之外的赏心悦目带给人的惊喜是我最喜欢冬的原因。只是可惜雪并不是每年都莅临，即使偶然到来也只有那薄薄的一层，轻轻盖在地面上。
所以我愈发地盼望着惊喜的出现，也就愈发地盼望着冬天早一点来，晚一点走。冬天是简单的，连颜色都是。它要么是清一色的大地的黑，要么就是彻底的雪白，偶尔两者叠在一起，倒成了灰色的大地。
树木掉光了叶子，只剩黑黑的枝干。人总有个奇怪的心理，就是有盼望才认真，有盼望才珍惜。天天期盼着一件事时，非常希望它成真，可是真的成真了却又不以为然，将它抛之脑后了。
黑黑的.树枝标记着冬天，望着望着，一股寒意便油然而生，衣服不由自主地裹紧了。于是冬天让人有了对春天的盼望，可是当春天真的到来时，似乎又惊讶地发现它并没有自己想的那样美好。人总是由期盼支撑着的。
雨一下，可就又是两样了。冬天一般不大下雨，可有时龙王在冬天也感冒了，路过时实在忍不住，打了两个喷嚏，那雨便淅淅沥沥地从天空洒了下来，落进地中。
空气变得阴冷潮湿，却又别有一番风味。地面变得有些潮湿泥泞，但是一股遮也遮不住活力却散发出来，朝四处游走。
与春的温婉、夏的狂暴、秋的悲凉相比，冬天是十分单调的，但是它的单调之中又透出许多种姿态和内涵来。
啊，这低调而又让人喜爱的冬啊!
