英语作文你最喜欢的公园五年级【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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英语作文你最喜欢的公园五年级【二】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
英语作文你最喜欢的公园五年级【三】
雨舒是个乐于助人的同学。有一天早上，老师把第五单元的考卷发给了我们，雨舒考了100分，而她的同桌小余婷只考了60分，雨舒看在眼里，替小余婷急在心里。丁零零下课铃响了，同学们争一窝蜂似地奔出教室到操场做游戏。我也不例外，迫不及待地跑去找好朋友雨舒玩。可往雨舒座位一看，只见雨舒身子紧靠着小余婷，凑过脑袋正专心致志地给小余婷讲解考卷中的错题呢！她讲解得那么认真，一会儿在本子上写写画画，一会儿在考卷上指指点点，一会儿叽哩呱啦地说个不停我走过去不耐烦地对雨舒说：别讲了，我们去玩吧！雨舒抬起头看了我一眼，笑眯眯地说：你先去玩吧，我得帮助小余婷帮这些题目弄懂！说完又低头耐心地讲解起来。我无可奈何地找其他同学一起去操场玩。
清脆悦耳的上课铃响了，我忙跑进教室。那天天气特别热，太阳像个大火球炙烤着大地，我玩得满头大汗。再看看雨舒，她仍然在为小余婷讲解难题，她也是大汗淋漓，豆大的汗水顺着额头往下流，不过，我知道她是为了帮助小余婷而流汗的。正在这时候，吴老师迈着大步走进教室，雨舒急忙把考卷折好，放在小余婷的抽屉里，然后凑到小余婷耳朵边，轻轻地说：待会儿下课我再继续帮你讲解。你上课一定要专心听讲，学习最重要的是靠自己的努力。
又一节课结束了，同学们又争先恐后地跑出去玩，可雨舒还是像刚才那样坐在原位聚精会神地给小余婷讲解难题。一分钟、两分钟功夫不负有心人，雨舒终于完成了任务，她长长地舒了一口气，仿佛心中的一块石头落了地，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。小余婷感激地说：谢谢雨舒！雨舒不好意思地说：不用谢，我的班长，这是我应该做的。说完，雨舒拉着我和小余婷的手一起高高兴兴地到操场玩去了。
这就是我的好朋友，一个乐于助人的同学，我最喜欢她，你们也喜欢她吗？
英语作文你最喜欢的公园五年级【四】
我有一位好班主任，她也是我们现在的语文老师——冯老师。冯老师很高挑，就像春天早晨中一棵亭亭玉立的柳树。她有一双亲切而慈祥的眼睛，就像春天清澈的溪水。她还戴着一副黑色的眼镜。她的头发像黑色的`瀑布倾流而下，不仅柔软而且很长，有一种朴素而自然的魅力。
冯老师的课上得很有趣，她会时不时的跟我们进行一些小互动，她讲的道理我们也懂。冯老师很无私，她会把她知道都告诉我们。
冯老师还很负责。如果有同学不舒服，冯老师会送他去医院检查，如果有同学吐了，冯老师不会嫌弃他，反而用拖把把地拖干净，然后用他的杯子倒热水给那个同学喝。
冯老师也很喜欢和我们一起玩。有一次心理健康课冯老师和我们玩“老鹰抓小鸡”，一开始冯老师当鸡宝宝，当老鹰的同学跑得很快，冯老师因为穿的高跟鞋，所以不小心扭伤了，我们都很担心，而她却说没事。下一轮，冯老师当起了指挥官，一会让我们跑慢点，小心摔倒。一会让我们跑快，别被抓到……我们玩的很开心。
在我心中，冯老师是如此善良和慈祥，给我留下了深刻的印象，让我难以忘记。
您为了我们付出了很多。
感谢您！冯老师！
英语作文你最喜欢的公园五年级【五】
我最喜欢法国作家圣埃克絮佩里写的那本《小王子》了。
“所有人都来自童年，但很少人记得”，也许这样，作者就写了《小王子》这个充满哲理的美丽童话故事献给那个曾经是个孩子的陪他一起长大的他亲爱的朋友。但当我们千千万万的朋友能够读懂这个故事的时候，很遗憾我们的童年已经离去很久了。
《小王子》这本书是在一次读书报告会上，一个学长极力推荐给我们阅读的，他说《小王子》是仅次于《圣经》发行量排名第二的一本书。我很好奇，也怪自己孤陋寡闻，怕是有种相见恨晚的遗憾吧!
到图书馆借来了《小王子》，不长，快速看了一遍，很简单的一个故事，一点也没读出什么名堂出来。我沉静下来，改变了以往快餐式只注重情节的阅读习惯，逐字逐句，边看边想象，带着圣灵般的心境走入了小王子的世界。小小的一本书，我整整看了四遍，越看越美越觉得有味，恨不得把它全摘抄下来。《小王子》里的语言有的深刻，有的简朴，有的用文字在描绘一幅幅清丽的画面，有的如刚出生的婴儿一样稚幼而真切。它能给小孩带来一个美丽世界的丰富想象，也能给我们曾经是小孩的大人以深刻思考和巨大张力。
现在我们来看我们主人公小王子吧!小王子是一个生活在遥远的星球上的一个可爱的小人儿。小王子的星球只有一间房子那么的大，在他的星球上长有很多小植物，其中有一种坏胚的面包树。面包树的幼苗不能根除，小王子更不能让它长大，不然树的根会毁星球的。我们的小王子每天早上都要起来寻找面包树牙，仔细地把它从花枝里辨认出来，并第一时间把它清理干净，这个工作很乏味但很简单。
小王子在他的星球上另一件有意义的事就是安静地观赏日落了。我们的小王子只需轻轻地搬移一下小椅子，就可以随时观看日暮降临的日落。小王子每天都要看四十三次日落。可是，小王子说“人难过的时候，总是爱看日落的”。
小王子的星球上长有一些简单的花，它们一般早上开放，晚上就悄悄的凋谢了。忽然有一天，他的`星球上吹来了一颗新种子，长出幼苗并结出了一个大大的花蕾，就是迟迟不肯开放。我们可爱的小王子，每天都要来看看，期盼地等着花开。
花儿在蓄意的精心打扮好自己后，选择一个日出的清晨开放了。我们的小王子满心欢喜，由衷赞叹说“哇!多美的花呀!”，“是说我吗”花甜甜得一点也不谦虚，还夸口道“我和太阳同时升起”
小王子从此精心地照料这多美丽的玫瑰，给她浇水，陪她解闷，她的出现带给了小王子芳香和快乐。接着，花儿在小王子面前耍各种各样的小心思，她刻意说些不着边际的谎言，故意亮亮爪子，想要小王子更加在意她呵护她。她说她怕冷，想要屏风，这回让我们的小王子苦恼了，他开始感到厌倦。花儿的爱小王子始终不能理解和明白，他太年轻了，最后选择了离开。小王子快要走了，他给玫瑰送来了屏风，玫瑰后悔地快要哭了，哽咽地说出了实情，自己毛毛虫都不怕，难道还怕冷吗?毕竟这不是一朵温室的玫瑰，她还是放开小王子让他去寻自己的梦了。
小王子离开前又到疏通了他的火山。在小王子的星球上，他拥有三座火山，两座火山是早上方便做早餐用的(小王子的火山喷发就像烟从烟囱上升起来一样，还有一火山除了小王子没有人知道它。平日里我们的小王子每周会来清理一次，这天他把三座小火山全都疏理一遍就离开了。
小王子的生活是如此简单美丽，但最终的最终，他还是独自离开旅行了。他的离开，走入未知的未来，一如我们不得不离开少年不识愁滋味的童年一样，永永远远地离去再也回不来了
