summerfun英语作文六年级三十字【一】
??云赛场三十秒四年级记叙文400字我在快乐大体验了许多的有趣的事情，其中一件就是我们经常玩扮手腕。
扳手腕比赛正式开始，参赛的选手分别是第一组的小陈和第三组的小顾，老师搬来一张椅子作为擂台，两位小选手就坐在凳子上，双手紧紧地握着，等待着比赛的开始。只听"一二三"小，比赛开始了，一声令下，两人陷入了苦战。可是，小陈哪有小顾的力气大呀，由于悬殊过于大，不一会，就被小顾扳的手几乎成60度。小陈可心急了，结果，小顾就轻而易举地把毫无胜算的小陈给打败了。小陈不服气，结果是三局两胜，被小顾又一次击败。
接下来是我和小顾的决战，我有点紧张，是因为看到小顾这么容易战胜对手，相比之下，小顾显得很得意呢。比赛开始，我和他握着手，双眼对看。"开始"我们两个一起用力，慢慢的`，我头上冒汗了，他也冒汗了，这时整个教室都沸腾了，都在为我们加油。忽然，小顾把手一斜，我没坚持住，第一局我输了。但是第二局我赢了，我想也许因为他连续作战吧，哈哈，同学们都为我欢呼。
我觉得这样的游戏看上去很简单，但是我知道是能锻炼我的意志力的哦。
summerfun英语作文六年级三十字【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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summerfun英语作文六年级三十字【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
summerfun英语作文六年级三十字【四】
2043年，我成为了一名摄影师。我如愿以偿，出版了一本又一本的摄影图集。在这漫长的三十年中，我游遍了大半个地球。我曾去格陵兰拍摄璀璨绚丽的极光，去海里捕捉多彩奇妙的瞬间，去照下东京樱花绽放的那一刻灿烂夺目……我喜爱大自然，更喜爱大自然带给我们的一切。
此时此刻，我正站在最新发明的绝缘屋中。三十年后的科技发达，人们可以在小屋中观察暴风雨的到来。我静静地等待暴风雨。雨已经淅淅沥沥地下了起来，原本晴朗的.天空已涌起片片乌云，如同一团团化不开的墨。忽然，窗外掠过一道闪电，紧接着便是一阵沉闷的雷声。我眼睛忽的一亮，没错，我这次的目标就是闪电！
“轰隆隆”，又是一声炸雷，这次的暴风雨格外的大。捕捉闪电不仅要快，更要靠运气。因为我们不知道闪电什么时候来，如果来了之后再拍的话就只能拍到一片残影。我计算着闪电与闪电之间间隔的时间，3、2、1,、拍！我猛得按下快门。只听“咔嚓”一声，一张照片便被我拍了出来。
我仔细端详着照片，我的运气真不错，恰好拍到了闪电划过的一瞬间。那细细密密的闪电犹如一条咆哮的巨龙掠过漆黑如墨的天空，弯弯曲曲，耀眼夺目，散发着美丽的白光，我笑得合不拢嘴。
这就是我梦想的未来，成为一个自由自在、无拘无束的摄影师，发现大自然的美，捕捉那精彩的一瞬间。
summerfun英语作文六年级三十字【五】
Early morning，sun farther—in—law showed smiling face，small alarm clock “ bite the bell bites bell “ the ground cries，seem to saying：“Beautiful，should get up！Should get up！！
Li Lixing，see sun farther—in—law came out，asperse on pale green branch full bright sunshine。 Li Li wore a beautiful powdery dress，wore a sky—blue pants again。 At this moment，transmit outside the window “ chirp “ cry，li Li looks up to look，a birdie is crying，seem to saying：“Li Li has breakfast quickly，I and you go to school together。 I and you go to school together。
Li Li eats breakfast rapidly，carry small satchel on the back，go to school together with birdie。
