怎么样修改作文最好【一】
One of the most crucial reasons for my view is that we could (canhave more opportunities to realize our dreams in the process of moving between places. As a young man(young men, we are all eager for success. However the road to (approach towardsuccess is so hard that we have to make great efforts. We must possess many aspects, including(去掉 outstanding intelligence, excellent education, rich experience and certainly good luck, most of which are acquired only by insistently pursuing, besides (andstudiously striving in different cities(if necessary. I can take one of my friends for instance. In order (toreceive the best education, after graduating from the senior school, he left his hometown to a remote city, BEIJING. But four years later, to looking for a better job, he left BEIJING and come to SHENZHEN, a beautiful city in his dream. Now his new goal is to enter American B-School to acquire (ofmore advanced knowledge in financing. We can see, in just about ten years, he has moves three times, and what is more(more importantly, this moving sill continue. Actually, in contemporary society more and more people are as this(act like him .
Another essential fact why (reason whyI hold my view is that we can enjoy a more rich and colorful (richer and more colorfullife, as we change places we live in. For my part, enjoying life is as important as, if not more important than, devoting work(hard working. It is a pleasing thing in the holiday to visit beautiful sceneries in different places. My friends mentioned in the last paragraph(before, has visited the snow scene in the north, and the widely (widesea in the south.
Admittedly, we cannot neglect the virtues (ofspending the entire life in one place. People can attained (attainthe feeling of family to their community, and the relationships between people are closer. Nevertheless moving between cities perhaps is more attractive to young persons than staying in one place thorough their lives.
From all the reasons mentioned above, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that if it is possible, I would move a number of times throughout my lives to look for the best job, house or climate I am eager for.
怎么样修改作文最好【二】
1.学生原有的本、本等，课前学生找出，仔细阅读教师作文本中的“眉批”、“总批”。
2.学生摘录的描写各方面的好词好句，适时利用。
怎么样修改作文最好【三】
添加符号先开了口：“观众们，请肃静一下，因为我，小主人才得以在原文中加入精美语段，因而得了一条又一条鱼鳞般的波浪线。所以我才有资格……”添加符号未说完，删减符号就插了嘴：“去去去!你也有资格评国王?每次你肚子里的不少“虫子”(错别字不还是我纠正的吗?怎么一下子好了伤疤忘了疼了?要不是我，你的波浪线早就成了一个个电灯泡(问号了。而且，每次荣誉总加在你头上，而我呢?则是个无名英雄，天天如啄木鸟一般辛勤。请各位评评理，到底谁的'功劳大?”删减符号顿了顿说：“因此只有我当国王才是你们最理智的选择!”说完了，它得意地坐在了桌子中心，跷起了二郎腿，得意地瞟了添加符号一眼，便目中无人地哼起了小调。添加符号气得脸色都发青了，可就是拿它没办法，谁叫自己被它抓住了把柄呢?
“我看哪，你们就别争了，小鸡肚肠的人也能当国王，真是天大的笑话!其实，我才是国王的最佳人眩”对调符号慢悠悠地开了口：“你们一个个不是增加，就是删减，而“我”呢?最公平了，堪称修改符号上的天秤!不多不少，不加也不减。还有最重要的一点，那就是———”“是什么?”添加符号与删减符号的脸上挂满了问号，异口同声地问道。“嗯——号吊了吊两个符号的胃口，缓缓地开了口：“当然我有大将风度??
吵声惊醒了字典，字典揉揉红肿的眼睛，抬了抬深度的眼镜说：“你们各有各的用处，谁也不能少，而且只能在用得着你们的地方发挥作用。只有发挥了自己的长处，才能成为一个真正能干的符号，为小主人做出贡献，使自己更加完美!”
听了字典的话，大家都鼓起了掌，从此，修改符号三兄弟不再说选国王这件事了，而是同心协力，将文章修改得更加美，老师看见了，禁不住竖起了大拇指。
瞧!这就是和睦的力量!
怎么样修改作文最好【四】
活动一 赏读积累，丰富语言
1.自主阅读摘录本上的好词好句。
2.同桌之间或小组之间互相赏读，资源共享。
3.教师补充一些描写比赛场面的成语和语句。
成语：
生龙活虎人流如潮振奋人心异常激烈你追我赶争先恐后 龙腾虎跃力争上游不甘落后 奋勇向前你争我夺英姿飒爽
语句：
A双方队员握紧绳子，他们一个个脚蹬着地，身体向后倾，拼命向自己的方向拽绳子。绳中间的红绸带一会儿移向猛虎队，一会儿又移向雄鹰队，互不相让。
B此时，我方的队员们一个个都红了眼，有的人脸憋得通红，有的人龇着牙、咧着嘴在叫劲，还有的人双手紧握绳子铆足了劲向自己方向拉。
C球飞快地向我飞来，我赶紧把力气集中在手腕上，看好球飞来的方向。用力一抽，球又被我反抽了回去。
D他紧绷着脸，双目圆瞪，手掌拉疼了也顾不得，还是一股作气地往后拉，脚跟往后退，一步、两步、三步……
E同学们高兴得又蹦又跳，互相拥抱，欢呼声、喝彩声，祝贺声使整个校园沸腾起来，连树上的小鸟也纷纷飞来凑热闹，好象在说：“这场比赛真精彩！”
活动二 回忆比赛，感受场景
1.回忆精彩的拔河比赛或者篮球等体育比赛。
2.小组交流，用心感受。（要重点感受比赛场上的气氛，注意选择一到两个典型人物进行重点描写，并注意写清啦啦队的表现，特别要注意人物的语言、动作、神态，同时要注意自己的心理感受）
怎么样修改作文最好【五】
一个阳光灿烂的早晨，小猪手里握着两根黄灿灿的香蕉，它剥掉第一个香蕉，津津有味的吃了起来。吃完了第一根香蕉，小猪把香蕉皮随手往后一扔。香蕉皮在空中划出一条优美的弧线，然后重重的摔在地上。小猪像是没看见，边走边剥着第二根香蕉。
这一幕刚好被大象伯伯看到了，它走到小猪跟前，语重心长地对小猪说：要爱护环境，万一有一个小动物踩着了，那可不得了啊！小猪听了大象伯伯的.话后想：不就是一根香蕉皮吗？有什么大不了的？小猪若无其事的，继续往前走。大象见了，无可奈何地用鼻子卷起香蕉皮，扔进了垃圾桶。
这时，小猪看到小熊蹦蹦跳跳的走了过来。一不小心踩中了一片西瓜皮，摔了个四脚朝天，他疼得哇哇叫。小猪见了赶快扶起他。小熊生气的批评那些乱扔垃圾的人。小猪听了面红耳赤，心想：看来乱扔垃圾真的会引起大麻烦。
于是，小猪捡起西瓜皮，扔进了垃圾桶。小熊走过去说：小猪，你真棒！小猪说：我只是在学大象伯伯的样。
