青海英语作文中考2024【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
青海英语作文中考2024【二】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
青海英语作文中考2024【三】
8月4日的那一天，我非常高兴因为我们一家要去青海旅游。在家里的时候爸爸老说青海的风景美，这次我到要看一看青海有多美！
我的爸爸车技好，开的又快，几个小时就到了。我们到了青海的市中心西宁，找到了宾馆，我们就去转景点。
我们在前往青海湖的途中我们看到了一望无际的油菜花。金黄色的美丽极了，从远处看油菜花几乎与天边连接着，从近处看油菜花像像一幅画，我们一家人留了一张影。我们又坐车到了青海湖，这湖水，乍看，犹似一潭诱人的陈酒，静静的，轻盈盈的；细看，宛如一面在翡翠帷幕中的宝镜，亮亮的，蓝湛湛的，湖平似镜！小船激起涟漪，摇晃到不远的地方，渐渐消失，湖面一抹而平。这一切，都像经过艺术家的裁剪，移步换形，变中并无赘余之笔。这一物一景又都倒映在鉴湖镜水之中，真是莹洁无比。
青海湖的景色和金灿灿的油菜花让我久久不能忘怀！
青海英语作文中考2024【四】
青海湖里的水非常蓝，就像蓝天映在湖水里一样。远远望去，蓝天和湖水交融在一起，分不清哪里是蓝天，哪里是湖水。我和妹妹一看到湖水，就兴奋的向湖边跑去，扑通一下跳进了水里，湖水有点凉，可是我和妹妹还是兴奋的玩了起来。青海湖的旁边有大片大片的油菜花，油菜花地里有大风车的建筑，我们在那里拍照玩耍。
晚上，爸爸妈妈告诉我明天要早起，去湖边看日出。
第二天早上五点钟，爸爸就喊我起床，我们一起来到湖边，这时天还没亮，来湖边观看日出的.人越来越多。向东望去，天边慢慢的出现淡红色的霞光，这时，天边露出了半个圆圆的小火球，它一点一点的往上升，我紧紧的盯着东方，丝毫不敢放松，因为我知道太阳马上就要升起来了。过了两三分钟，半个小火球慢慢变成了一个大火球，从湖面上升了起来，湖水被阳光照亮了。
青海英语作文中考2024【五】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
青海英语作文中考2024【六】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
青海英语作文中考2024【七】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
