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雅思小作文写作技巧地图(雅思小作文写作模板不会用)

雅思小作文写作技巧地图(雅思小作文写作模板不会用)

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雅思小作文写作技巧地图(雅思小作文写作模板不会用)

雅思小作文写作技巧地图【一】

太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹,缺乏真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。

例:A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项调查显示。。。)

"65%"让文章看起来有些假,有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。

雅思小作文写作技巧地图【二】

在写作时我们同样需要注意词汇搭配的问题,下面让我们来看一个雅思写作的常见句子:

Advertisements have influences on people.

相信所有备考过关于广告和传播话题的烤鸭对这个句子都不会陌生对不对,那么我们现在开始试着扩句。

雅思小作文写作技巧地图【三】

撩一丝长发,轻揽簪钗,镜中独见形容憔悴,故颜不再。望槛外,长波千里,远帆渐进,独不见君归,无言垂泪,斑斑灼青衫。——题记

曾忆昔,相顾江南,烟柳漫堤。燕影莺语,华草长,行人步于溪涧寻清凉之处,溪水潺?,偶见游鱼穿梭其间,而道旁翠竹,清风瑟瑟,影映石上,微漾,进而消失无踪,搔首喟己之惑,实为影也。愈入而日光昏暗,时有余光穿涧而下,照丛间,而虫蚁??不可见。野芳发,见深谷幽兰、百合于其间,气惠而随风渐释。复行,则清泉出于山隙,汩汩澈澈,俯而饮之,甘冽似醇浆玉液。其上,一亭,其角檐似翼起,拾级而上,见一白衣女子独倚危栏,掩面而泣,啜啜有声,不过须臾,襟衫湿矣。稍停,不得其解,故上前而问之,然其惟低眉不语,啜泣不止。

余欲劝止而无方,故坐于亭下长阶之处,思这优雅之境处此深涧,虽有恬然之趣、旷世之味,然无赏之者,荣于深涧,枯于深涧,亦未免孤独。转而思,其所以荣于此经年而无扰之者,或为此造化之地所以成之,不免叹息。物存于世,之于人,于山川树木,虫鱼鸟兽,往往难得其完满,必有缺损,此虽无奈然实为自然之法则。

白衣女子闻吾喟而叹,亦异而问吾何所思,吾告之,其思而轻言语余,语罢,吾知其所以于此,无心赏景而掩面啜泣,实为相思致之。此女名曰如烟,旧时与一才俊相遇此景,良辰美景,才子佳人,不免心生情愫,二人相与步于涧中,不觉日暮西斜,故相约此间花开树荣为时相会,自此归去。不觉冬去春回,旧日之境依旧,独不见旧日之人,如烟不禁失落,故时时到此,徘徊其间或于亭中,犹不见心上之人,不觉至于今日。

来者不至,苦煞候者,此之谓也。唯能良言劝之,望其所思之人不日到此,二人便可相见,以解此相思之苦。

旧日之事,今思之犹有所感,故以纪之。

雅思小作文写作技巧地图【四】

2. Many schools demand the students wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality. What is your opinion?

3. Some people believe that pet animals such as cats and dogs cannot be kept in the cities, especially in busy modern cities. Do you agree or disagree?

4. Nowadays, teenagers cause a lot of social problems due to lack of discipline. Some people think that parents should spend more time staying with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

5. Nowadays, many children have their part-time jobs. Some people say that doing part-time jobs is useful, but others argue that children should enjoy their childhood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

6. Some people think if students want to learn a foreign language, it is advisable for them to learn it in the native countries where the language is actually spoken. Whats your opinion? Give your reasons.

7. In some countries, there are women taking the positions of police officers, while some people believe that women are not suitable to work in the police force. DO you agree or disagree? Write your reasons and give examples in your experience.

雅思小作文写作技巧地图【五】

IT产业,经过数十年的发展,在存储运算和运输能力上都已经有了几何级的,则升级。如本书所言,人工智能要在商业领域取得巨大的成功,就必须建立强大而复杂的智能系统,只需要四个基础条件。如今已经一一具备:第一个条件数百万倍的计算能力,条件更高级的算法,第三个万物互联的海量数据,第四个高容量大带宽的通信管道。

人工智能海啸,之所以把人工智能底座和战争是因为它相对于传统互联网发动的常规战争而言,无论是从企业竞争力的角度还是从社会影响力的角度,都将带来好几个量级的颠覆效应。事实上,阿尔法go战胜李世石只是人工智能海啸的第一波海啸,最厉害的地方往往是第二波第三波很快人工智能云计算大数据和物联网等技术的融合与发展,就会将互联网技术的竞争带入全新的高度。

不过,面对这场核战争,我们无需恐惧,甚至可以说中国企业在某些方面反而有特定的优势,比如说我们有巨大的互联网用户群,而庞大的人口基数又为我们提供了海量的数据。在这场人工智能时代的核战争中,首先是人才的竞争。因此,在培养吸收顶尖人才方面中国企业提出了比以往更加高的要求。其次,发展人工智能技术,开放与协作比以前任何时候都显得更加重要,我们要努力实现多种数据源之间的\'合作,创建自由与实相讨论环境,实现网络和数据的一体化。

世界已经进入一个全新的智能时代,在这个时代世界将发生巨大的改变。历史上,人类大概只有在工业革命时期才会经历过类似的变化,政府企业都将面临全新的挑战,因此需要快速的学习和适应,并齐心合力创造全新的人工智能商业生态,这将会决定中国在人工智能领域的崛起与壮大。另一方面,目前国外人工智能领域的领跑者都是谷歌脸谱网亚马逊这样的庞大庞然大物,每一个都拥有高达数百亿上千亿的美金市值的公司,我们稍不小心机会就将转瞬即逝。

危险和危机最大的不同在于前者隐含可能的灾害,后者暗喻潜在的契机,但是没有危险,伤也不会做出颠覆性的变革。一场轰轰烈烈的人工智能领域认知商业革命已经开启。

雅思小作文写作技巧地图【六】

虽然来源于身边社会,但不可让描述方式变的太鸡毛蒜皮,拿不上台面。其实这点非常容易办到,只需要把事件中某一个具体的你,我,他,变成是客观群体,比如说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

举例的常见表达方式:

for example,/for instance,(后加句子)

Such as/ like      (后加词组)

Take... as an example,

A case in point is that......

其次,在举例时还应注意尺度。

1. 应避免使用第一人称和第二人称,为了加强客观性,应将人称写成第三人称。

改正:Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物,例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得快乐并且缓解孤独感)

2. 应避免引用一项调查研究,并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉,用含糊的方法表示。

改正:There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据表明。。。)

3. 应避免将例子局限在一个国家,尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

改正:Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界,许多孩子在屏幕前待太久,导致了他们的视力减弱。

“全世界”的表达方式:around the world, all over the world, across the globe

【写作真题】The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

【名师献计】This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.

雅思小作文写作技巧地图【七】

这类考生往往缺乏刨根究底的精神,总是在主旨周围绕圈子,不达中心。这也是中国考生的通病,看似八九不离十,却总也不愿把话点破,让考官怎能不又急又气。

在所有的扩展方式之中,因果推理法是最受用也是最透彻的方法。凡事先追溯到其原由,再扩展其结果,这是将主题阐述清晰、论述有力并且具有逻辑感的最佳手段。例如在“出国留学利弊”这一题目之前,若考生单纯说“有可能会使青少年学坏”,难免缺乏说服力,但若紧接着扩展“因为孩子高中毕业后思想上还不成熟,若认识不好的朋友会难以抵抗社会上不好的诱惑”,那么此论点一定会让考官眉头舒展,点头认同。由此可见,善用此推理法会让议论文如虎添翼,事半功倍。

引出原因的表达方式主要有:Because../Since.../As....

引出结果的表达方式主要有:so.../Therefore,.../Consequently,.../Accordingly,... /As a result,.../In this way,.../result in.../Thanks to.../Due to.../ Owing to..

【写作真题】Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or ate out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss.

【名师献计】It is important to note that imports are now increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of importing. Meanwhile, technical advance in the food processing industry has made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties...