中考满分英语作文范文欣赏【一】
桃花是一种很平常的花，然而在我的心目中却有着特殊的地位。看到它，我就想起与一位朋友的一段往事。
那是几年前的一个春天，我到邻村一位好友家作客。我们一块去野外散步，走到她家的果园里时，她郑重地折了一枝桃花，递到我手里，说：“送给你，愿咱们永远都是好朋友。”那时，我们临近小学毕业，同学们互相写留言，送礼物，但是没有一个想到送花的。
我用塑料薄膜将这枝桃花包起来，飞奔回家。我想：“可不能让这枝友谊之花凋谢了。”回到家，我就让爷爷把它嫁接在我家果园里的一棵桃树上，并做了标记。几天后，我欣喜地发现，它们成活了。
花谢花开，又是一年，我已经在山外中学上初中了。我的那位朋友因为家境贫困，没能继续上学。由于离家远，功课又紧，我很少回家。渐渐地，我忘记了那枝桃花，忘记了那棵桃树。
暑假的一天，爷爷端来一筐桃，让我尝尝鲜。爷爷挑出几个红红的大桃给我，说：“苗苗，这几个是你从朋友家带来的那桃枝结的。那桃真是好品种，结得又大，又甜，又多。我又把那些芽嫁接到别的树上去了。”我心头一震，这才想起那枝桃花。爷爷又说：“你的那个朋友到我们家来过两次，都没见到你。她还特地跑到果园里去看那桃树，可惜季节不对，没看到桃树结果。”
我跑到果园里，来到那棵桃树前，望着那寂寞的桃枝。那枝桃已分了好几个杈，枝繁叶茂，上面还挂着好多青里透红的桃子。
看着这累累硕果，我的眼泪不觉流了下来。谁说桃李无言，我分明听到它在说：“我们永远是朋友。”原谅我吧，好朋友，竟然这么长时间没跟你联系了。都说是“人非草木，孰能无情”，却原来草木比人更有情。
老朋友，我这就去找你。
中考满分英语作文范文欣赏【二】
和你在一起
网络啊，你是高科技、现代化的象征，按说，和你在一起，我会收获知识和快乐，可是，你却让我失去了太多太多——
镜头一
“爸爸，学校收资料费，要27块钱。”我对爸爸说。爸爸听了后，颇感不满地问我：“上周不是才交了18元资料费吗?”我心里害怕起来，生怕爸爸知道我在欺骗他，生怕爸爸知道我是骗钱上网，支支吾吾着不知怎么回答爸爸的问题，但爸爸还是从他的兜里掏出了27元钱递给我，说：“到校就交给老师，可不要丢了啊!”……网络啊，请你看看，和你在一起，我失去了比金钱还要宝贵的诚实。
镜头二
英语课上了还不到十分钟，我就没有了一点精神。我清楚，这是我与A在网络玩了一整夜游戏的结果。心里面虽然强迫自己要拿出点精神，但却管不住自己，慢慢地我就将头靠在课桌上睡着了。当然，英语老师没有忘记当着全班同学的面狠狠地批评我一番，外带罚站两节课的时间……网络啊，请你看看，和你在一起，我失去了比金钱还宝贵的人格尊严。
镜头三
我的朋友B被外校的C打了一顿，B将这件事情告诉我们，我们都非常气愤，商量着如何解决这个问题。D说：“不如我们学学网络游戏中的办法，一伙人联合起来收拾收拾C。”这个建议获得了我们一致的.同意。于是，放学后，我们组织了六个人在路上截住了C，对他进行穷追猛打，直至将C打得头破流、肋骨折断……网络啊，请你看看，和你在一起，我失去了比金钱还宝贵的善良品格。
网络啊，虽说你是高科技、现代化的象征，但你让我们失去了太多宝贵的东西!我恳请你想一个良方，让我和你在一起的时候，只收获知识和快乐，不要再失去所剩无几的财富!
[点评]本文值得借鉴的地方：1、“我”与网络对话，直陈“和你在一起”的种种损失，这种构思别开生面，令人耳目一新。其次，在开头设计悬念，吸引人看下去，在结尾提出愿望，让人掩卷深思，也是本文构思上的一大亮点。我们己经谈过构思的作用，本文更是一个有力的证明。如果按普通的叙述办法来写这篇文章，容易显得呆板平淡。2、串珠式结构并在每颗“珠”的后面以“和你在一起，我失去了比金钱还宝贵的……”作结，形成排比段，使文章脉结清晰，对网络的 “指控”十分有力。
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中考满分英语作文范文欣赏【三】
Snow-white
Once there was a Queen. She was sitting at the window. There was snow outside in the garden-snow on the hill and in the lane, snow on the hunts and on the trees: all things were white with snow.
The Queen was making a coat for a little child. She said, "I want my child to be white as this cloth, white as the snow. And I shall call her Snow-white."
Some days after that the Queen had a child. The child was white as snow. The Queen called her Snow-white.
But the Queen was very ill, and after some days she died. Snow-white lived, and was a very happy and beautiful child.
One year after that, the King married another Queen. The new Queen was very beautiful; but she was not a good woman.
A wizard had given this Queen a glass. The glass could speak. It was on the wall in the Queen's room. Every day the queen looked in the glass to see how beautiful she was. As she looked in the glass, she asked: "Tell me, glass upon the wall, who is most beautiful of all?" And the glass spoke and said: "The Queen is most beautiful of all."
Year went by. Snow-white grew up and became a little girl. every day the Queen looked in the glass and said, "Tell me, glass upon the wall, who is most beautiful of all?" And the glass said, "Snow-white is most beautiful of all."
When the Queen heard this, she was very angry. She said, "Snow-white is not more beautiful than I am. There is no one who is more beautiful than I am."
Then the Queen sat on her bed and cried.
After one hour the Queen went out of her room. She called one of the servants, and said, "Take Snow-white into the forest and kill her."
The servant took Snow-white to the forest, but he did not kill her, because she was so beautiful and so good. He said, "I shall not kill you; but do not go to the King's house, because the Queen is angry and she will see you. If the Queen sees you, she will make some other man kill you. Wait here in the forest; some friends will help you." Then he went away.
Poor Snow-white sat at the foot of a tree and cried. Then she saw that night was coming. She said, "I will not cry. I will find some house where I can sleep tonight. I cannot wait here: the bears will eat me."
She went far into the forest. Then she saw a little hut. She opened the door of the hut, and went in. In the hut she saw seven little beds. There was a table, and on the table there were seven little loaves and seven little glasses. She ate one of the loaves. Then she said, "I want some water to drink." So she drank some water out of one of the glasses. Then she fell asleep on one of the seven little beds.
The hut was the home of seven Little Men. When it was night, the seven Little Men came to the hut. Each Little Man had a big beard, and a little blue coat. Each Little Man came into the hut, and took his little lamp. Then each Little Man sat down, and ate his little loaf, and drank his little glass of water.
But one Little Man said, "Someone has eaten my little loaf." And another Little Man said, "Someone has drunk my little glass of water." Then the seven Little Men went to bed, but one Little Man said, "Someone is sleeping on my little bed." All the seven Little Men came to look at Snow-white as she slept on the Little Men's bed. They said, "She is very beautiful."
Snow-white awoke, and saw the seven Little Men with their big beards standing near her bed. She was afraid. The Little men said, "Do not be afraid. We are your friends. Tell us how you came here." Snow-white said, "I will tell you." Then she told them her story.
They said, "Do not be afraid. Live here with us. But see that the door shut when we are not in the house with you. Do not go out. If you go out, the bad Queen will find you. Then she will know that you are not dead, and will tell someone to kill you." So Snow-white lived in the hut with the seven Little Men.
After some days Snow-white went into the garden. One of the Queen's servants was going through the forest, and he saw her. He went and told the Queen, "Snow-white is in a hut in the forest." The Queen was very angry when she heard that Snow-white was not dead.
The Queen took an apple. She made a hole in the red side of the apple, and put some powder into the hole. Then she put on old clothes and went to the hut. She called, "Is any one there?" Snow-white opened the door, and came out to her. The Queen said, "I have some pretty apples. Eat one of my pretty apples." Snow-white took the apple and said, "Is it good?" The Queen said, "See, I will eat this white side of the apple; you eat the red side. Then you will know that it is good."
Snow-white ate the red side of the apple. When the powder was in her mouth, she fell down dead. The Queen went back to her house. She went into her room. she looked into the glass and said, "Tell me, glass upon the wall, who is most beautiful of all?" The glass said, "The Queen is most beautiful of all." Then the Queen know that Snow-white was dead.
The Little Men came back to the hut. When they saw that Snow-white was dead, the poor Little Men cried. Then they put Snow-white in a box made of glass. They took the glass box to a hill and put it there, and said, "Everyone who goes by will see how beautiful she was." Then each Little Man put one white flower on the box, and they went away.
Just as they were going away, a Prince came by. He saw the glass box and said, "What is that?" Then he saw Snow-white in the box. He said, "She was very beautiful: but do not put her there. There is a hall in the garden of my father's house. It is all made of white stone. We will take the glass box and put it in the hall of beautiful white stone."
The Little Men said, "Take her." Then the Prince told his servants to take up the box. They took up the box. Just then one of the servants fell down. The box fell, and Snow-white fell with the box. The bit of apple fell out of her mouth: she awoke, and sat up, and said, "Where am I?"
The Prince said, "You are with me. I never saw anyone as beautiful as you. Come with me and be my Queen."
The Prince married Snow-white, and she became his Queen.
A man went and told this to the bad Queen. When she heard it she was so angry that she fell down dead.
Snow-white lived and was very happy ever after. And the Little Men came to see her every year.
白雪公主
从前，有一个王后，她坐在窗户旁。窗外的花园里积满了雪，山上是雪，小路上是雪，树上和屋顶上也积着雪，万物一片白茫茫。她手中拿着些布和一枚针，她手中的不就像雪一样洁白。王后正在为小孩做一件上衣，她说：“我想我的孩子能够像这布一样白，想雪一样白，我要叫她'白雪公主'。”
几天之后，王后生了个小孩，这个孩子白得像雪一样，王后给她取名为“白雪公主”。但是，王后得了重病，几天以后就去世了。白雪公主活了下来，她是一个十分幸福和美丽的孩子。
王后去世一年以后，国王又娶了一位王后。新王后十分漂亮，但是，她不是一个善良的女人。一个巫师给了新王后一面镜子，这面镜子会说话，它挂在王后房间的墙上，每天王后照着镜子，欣赏自己多么漂亮。当她照镜子的时候，她问：“告诉我，墙上的魔镜，谁是世界上最漂亮的人？”于是魔镜开口说道：“王后是世界上最漂亮的。”
过了数年，白雪公主长成大人了。当白雪公主是一个年轻姑娘时，有一天，王后照着镜子说：“告诉我，墙上的魔镜，谁是世界上最漂亮的？”魔镜说：“白雪公主是世界上最漂亮的。”
当王后听到这些话时，非常恼怒，她说：“白雪公主没有我漂亮，没有一个人比我更漂亮。”然后，王后坐在床上哭了。一小时后，王后从她的房间走出来，她叫来一个仆人说：“把白雪公主带到森林中掉。”
仆人带着白雪公主到了森林，但他没有她，因为她太美丽太善良了。他说：“我不会你的，但是，你不能回王宫，因为，王后很生气，她会看到你的。如果王后发现你，她会让别人你的。你就呆在森林里，会有朋友来帮助你的。”然后，他走了。
可怜的白雪公主坐在一棵树底下哭了，这时，她看到天快黑了，她说：“我不哭了，我要找所房子今晚好睡觉，我不能呆在这儿了，熊会吃了我的。”她往森林深处走去，这时，她发现了一座小屋，她打开小屋的门，走了进去。在小屋里，她看到七张小床，还有一张桌子，桌子上有七块小面包和七个小杯子。她吃了其中一块面包，然后说：“我想喝点水。”于是，她又喝了一个杯子中的一些水。之后，她躺在一张小床上睡着了。
这座小屋是七个小矮人的家。当天黑下来的时候，七个小矮人回到小屋。每个小矮人都留着一副大胡子，穿一件小蓝上衣。小矮人进了小屋，每个人都点上他们的小灯，然后，小矮人都坐下，开始吃面包，喝小杯里的水。
但是，一个小矮人说：“有人把我小面包吃了。”另一个小矮人说：“有人把我的小杯子里的水喝了。”然后，七个小矮人去睡觉。可是一个小矮人说：“有人正睡在我的小床上。”七个小矮人都过来看睡在小矮人床上的白雪公主。他们说：“她真漂亮。”
白雪公主醒了，发现七个留着大胡子的小矮人正站在她床旁，她很害怕。小矮人们说：“别害怕，我们是你的好朋友，告诉我们你是怎么来这儿的。”白雪公主说：“我告诉你们。”接着她就给他们讲述了自己的经历。他们说：“不要害怕。就在这儿和我们住在一起，但是，我们不在家的时候，你一定要关上门，千万别出去。如果你出去了，坏王后会发现你，这样，她知道你没有，会让人来你。”于是，白雪公主和七个小矮人在这座小屋里生活着。
几天以后，白雪公主去了一趟花园。王后的一个仆人正经过这片森林，他发现了阿。他回去告诉了王后：“白雪公主在森林的一座小屋里。”王后听说白雪公主没有，十分恼火。
王后拿来一个苹果，她在苹果红的一边挖了一个洞，把一些毒的粉末放在这个洞里。然后，她穿上一身旧衣服，去了小屋。她喊：“屋里有人吗？”白雪公主打开门，出来见她。王后说：“我有一些漂亮的苹果，吃一个尝尝吧？”白雪公主拿着苹果说：“这好吃吗？”王后说：“瞧，我吃苹果白的一半，你吃红的一半，你会知道它味道不错。”白雪公主吃了苹果红的一半，当粉末进入她嘴里时，她倒下去了。
王后回到家，进了自己的房间，对着镜子说：“告诉我，墙上的魔镜，谁是世界上最漂亮的。”魔镜说：“王后是世界上最漂亮的。”于是，王后知道白雪公主已经了。
小矮人们回到小屋，发现白雪公主了。可怜的小矮人们全都哭了。然后，他们把白雪公主放进玻璃棺材里，并把它抬到山坡上，安放在那里，说：“每位经过这里的人都会看见她是多么美丽。”接着每个小矮人在棺材上放了一朵白花，然后离开了。
他们刚刚要离开，一位王子从此经过，他看着玻璃棺材说：“那是什么？”这时，他发现白雪公主躺在里面，他说：“她太美丽了，把能把她放在这里，在父亲的王宫里有一座大厅，整个大厅都是用白石头砌成，我们把玻璃棺材搬到那所漂亮的白石大厅里。”小矮人们说：“抬走她吧。”
然后，王子告诉他的仆人抬起棺材。他们抬起它时，不巧一个仆人跌倒了。把棺材也摔到地上，白雪公主随同棺材跌了下来，那块苹果从她嘴里掉了出来，她醒了过来，坐起来说：“我这是在哪儿？”王子说：“你跟我在一起，我从来没有见过一位像你这么美丽的人，跟我来，做我的王后吧。”王子和白雪公主结婚了，她成了王后。
一个人去把这些消息告诉了坏王后，当她听到这些，气得倒下去了。从那以后，白雪公主一直生活得很幸福。每年小矮人们都来看她。
New Words and Expressions 生词和词组：
wizard n. 男巫
hut n. 茅舍，小屋
中考满分英语作文范文欣赏【四】
一夜细雨，天空阴得几欲滴水。
在空蒙的氤氲尽处，一缕荒烟，几点残红。那绺早樱，缓缓飘入泥沼，发出零丁的叹息，偶一寒鸦点水而过，却被风中发出的声响惊得高飞。
我站在车站前，心烦抖去落在发捎的雨丝，接连几天的细雨和几场的失利让我不由得心烦气躁，仿佛是为了我的坏心情应景一般，雨似乎刚才更大了。
风把我身后的咳嗽声吹得七零人落的，仿佛满地碎金。我下意识地回过头，一个身高只到我肩膀的小男孩和一个白发零星的老人。大概是接孩子放学的家长吧，我暗想，小孩懂事地从老人手中拿过书包，背在背上，然后搀着老人，动作利落，我不由得一震，小孩没有说一句话，可他关切的心情已经传到了我这个旁观者的心中，一股暖暖的亲情。
“啊，对不起。”伴随着后背一阵冰凉的触感，一声道歉在我身边响起。我诧异地回头，一个中年的妇女正在收起她那把边角有些磨损的伞，一边朝我抱歉地笑笑，她提着一个满满的茶篮，带着满足的笑脸，从她身上几乎看不到等车的焦急。再次与她目光相接，我似乎看到妈妈在油烟浓重的厨房中做菜的身影。我突然有股流泪的冲动。
我总是如此，每每遇到点挫折就满腹牢却忽略了自己一直被温暖的亲情所环绕，餐桌上美味的饭菜，是妈妈常给我的好心情，闲谈时的一个笑话，是爸爸给我的一个好心情。在亲情的培育中，这样的好心情难道不足以驱散我心中那点不如意吗?
我们的生活中，这样能够给我们带来好心情的事俯拾即是，只是你未曾发现。当我们在风雨中忧郁时，不要忘了雨过天晴天际那抹能够带给你好心情的彩虹的美丽。当我们在失败时，更不能忘了在心中默祷我们能拥有一份好心情的亲人们。
随着人群中一阵低低的欢呼，随着最后几滴雨丝上方彩虹的浮现，公车来了，每个人都满怀笑容地上了车。我整理一下思绪，准备用笑容迎接等待我回家的妈妈。希望我的笑容，能带给她最好的心情。
中考满分英语作文范文欣赏【五】
"An illusory snake in a goblet" is used to describe the psychological state of being frightened caused by taking illusions as reality.
“杯弓蛇影”比喻把虚幻当作真实的恐惧心理。
In Jin Dynasty there was a man named Yue Guang who was fond of drinking alcohol.
晋朝有个叫乐(yuè广的人，爱喝酒。
One day, he invited a friend to his house to drink together.
一天，他邀请朋友到家里来对斟（zhēn对饮。
Suddenly, his friend saw the reflection of a snack swimming in the goblet.
忽然，朋友看见酒杯里有条蛇影在游动。
He got so much frightened that he took ill on bed after getting home.
他受了惊吓，回去便一病不起。
And neither any doctor or any medicine could cure his illness.
请医服药，都无起色。
Yue Guang came to see him and asked about the cause of his disease.
乐广跑来看他，问明起病的缘由。
When he got to know the cause, he pulled his friend from the bed immdiately and took him to his house.
乐广听后一把拉起朋友往家走。
Yue Guang made his friend sit where he used to, pouring a goblet of alcohol for him, and asked him," Is there any snake reflection in the goblet?"
他让朋友坐在原处，斟满酒问：“有蛇影吗？”
There was still a "snake reflection" in the goblet! Yue casually took away the bow hanging on the wall.
杯子里还有“蛇影”！乐广随手取下墙上的弓。
This time, the "snake reflection" disappeared.
这次，“蛇影”不见了！
"So it was the bow reflection that was in the goblet!" His friend at once got well from his illness.
“杯子里原来是弓影呀！”朋友的病情顿时好了！
中考满分英语作文范文欣赏【六】
冬日的寒风凌冽而决绝地打击着窗，窗在“砰砰”地响，冬雨和冬风一起，演绎着一年中最后一个季节——冬。
冬天的寒冷，冬天的干燥，冬日的万物凋零，都是我讨厌冬天的理由。但当有一天，我从另一个角度，欣赏到冬天的美……
早晨起床拉开窗帘，才发现阳台上的植物在入冬之后因霜冻而亡，呼出的气体变成了白白的雾。冬天的早晨，阴而冷，我穿上厚厚的大衣，向门外走去。
从楼梯走到楼下，竟发现一缕淡淡的阳光穿过冬日浓浓的雾，在这样微小的温暖之下，逐渐有了欣喜之情。忽然发现冬天的惊喜在于，最需要温暖时阳光随影而至。
不一会儿，阳光变洒满了一整个小城，从家门走出遇见了几个邻居，便寒暄了几句。
“今天的太阳可真好，要把衣服拿去晒晒了。”
“是啊是啊，今天的太阳可真好。”
厚厚的大衣在阳光之中更显温暖，此时已有许多邻居拿着一把小小的椅子，在阳光下尽情享受冬天所要给予人们的暖意了。
家门口对面的老奶奶此时也在门外，穿着厚厚的大衣，坐在舒适的椅子上。一旁的孙子直缠着老奶奶：“奶奶，给我讲故事吧。”老奶奶便捏着孙子那圆滚滚的小脸直说好。
老奶奶的儿子和儿媳走出门，儿媳手中的围巾道出了爱。她把围巾轻轻地围在老奶奶的脖子上，理了理老奶奶的衣领，笑着说：“妈，我们上班啦，你要主意身体。”
老奶奶脸上开出了花，道：“早去早回啊。”
“爸爸妈妈再见。”
一家人都笑了，多么温暖的画面。冬天的美丽在于，仅仅需要一点阳光，就可以看到暖阳下嬉戏的儿童，暖阳下织毛衣的妇女，暖阳下笑得很满足的老人。
美丽，需要走过转角欣赏，如冬天。继续向前走，看见另一个冬天。
走尽这老街小巷，竟发现许多树都在蓬勃生长，蓝空下生命力分毫不改，郁郁葱葱。尽管冬日的寒冷在打击着，树木依旧如战士一样守卫着生的尊严。叶子像夏日一样富有生的气息。拔地而起的生命又怎么会轻易被催残?
我低头，却意外看见新生的小草，浅浅的绿色，从土壤中钻出的生命，新奇地望着这个充满惊喜的世界。原来，冬天也意味着不屈服，用力量与冬对抗。冬，却也是一个审判员。只有坚强的生命才可越过寒冬，重获新生。
冬天应该是一个很容易让人满足的季节吧，比如说阳光，比如温暖，在这样的温暖与希望中也逐渐喜欢上冬天了。她虽凌冽决绝，却也不乏生命与浪漫。
而这一感受，是从欣赏中感受到的。
