2010年12月四级作文范文【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
2010年12月四级作文范文【二】
最近闲来无事，又看了一遍这部经典的动画影片《年月的神话》，英文译名是onlyyesterday。前次看，现已是两年前了，现在现已28岁的我，越来越能从中找到共识了。
27岁的女孩妙子，一个住在东京的一般上班族，面对被催婚的压力，因从小一向神往着村庄的日子，也为了暂时逃避现实，所以向公司请了10天假，到乡间姐夫家协助采摘红花，影片从这儿打开。
在开往乡间的夜班火车上，藏在回忆深处的幼年妙子，在摇晃的车厢中从成年妙子的梦里苏醒过来。
那个神往去暑假乡间休假，终究被奶奶骗去了海滨浴场一日游的妙子；
那个与校园棒球手广田之间具有青涩模糊的初恋的妙子；
那个央求爸爸买来菠萝，成果等了一个星期，菠萝仍是又生又涩，终究得出了，生果之王的称谓，仍对错香蕉莫属定论的妙子；
那个仅有的一次挨爸爸的打的妙子；
那个考了25分数学试卷被家人以为智力有问题的妙子；
那个失去话剧排练的妙子；
那个不肯与转学生握手的妙子，等等等等。
这些生长旅程上的纤细的心绪与伤痛，全都浮现在27岁的妙子眼前。
能回忆起这么多的东西，可见年月是多么的奥妙。妙子说记起这么多五年级的回忆，是因为五年级的自己正在阅历了人生中的一个转机，那时候的伤痛没有散去，一向留在她的回忆深处。现在她踏上了这次采摘红花的村庄之旅，遇到了小她两岁的俊雄，那些无人倾诉的纤细心绪与生长的伤痛，被一点一点治好。遇到俊雄，应该是她人生中另一个严重的转机吧。
影片终究，十天假日完毕后的妙子终究遵照了良心，跳下了开往东京的火车，回到了这个她从心底喜爱上的村庄，做了她生命中最重要的'一个决议，与俊雄在一起，成为了一个真实的农妇。
看到终究，背景音乐响起，幼年的妙子和她的小伙伴拉着成年后的妙子飞驰下车，朝着俊雄跑去，眼泪又一次滑落。妙子的归宿，我想这是最好的组织，俊雄对天然、农业和一般人的知道，是那么让人惊喜和安心。俊雄很合适她，尽管妙子的年岁比他大，可他却让妙子觉得他才是那个协助认清自己的人，那是可以信赖和依托的感觉，那是让妙子想扎根下来的力气。
我想这部影片之所以能牵动到我，除了我真的老了以外，大约还觉得妙子特别像存在咱们身边的一般的人，终究离别城市，回到故土过那种本真日子的一般人。
想想自从结业后，来深圳一转眼现已7年了，最初的同学老友现已散落在天边，有的已有归宿，有的还在人海踽踽独行。有时候会觉得时刻彻底不够用，似乎一睁一闭间，年月又曩昔久，又如同有一个小偷，声势浩大的偷走了一部分。大约这便是生长的味道，纤细、苦涩、惆怅。
2010年12月四级作文范文【三】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
