何凯文四级2020作文【一】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
何凯文四级2020作文【二】
春天， 万物复苏，小河水哗哗地顺流而下； 活泼机灵的小鸟们在枝头喳喳地纵情歌唱； 小草们神不知鬼不觉地从地下探出了脑袋，大地换上了绿色的新衣； 小野花们争先恐后地展示着自己的美丽； 一棵棵大树好像正在返老还童， 抽出嫩黄色的新芽；。年迈的`凤凰木也紧跟着春天的步伐， 吐出米粒大小的嫩叶， 就像刚出生的婴儿那般娇嫩。
夏天，太阳像一个火炉似地炙烤着地面。凤凰木的叶子早已变成了深绿色，枝条也向四周扩展了许多，变成了一把绿色的大伞。当太阳透过茂密的树叶筛下一束束金光时， 美丽的凤凰花绽开了一张张笑脸，好像给凤凰木披上了红色的霞衣。
秋天，凤凰树的叶子慢慢地变成了金黄色，在微风吹拂下纷纷飘落下来， 给地面铺上了一层厚厚的金色地毯。课间十分钟，我和小伙伴们在凤凰树下尽情地玩耍、嬉闹，甭提有多高兴了。
冬天，刺骨的寒风从耳边呼呼地刮过，古老的凤凰木褪去了繁华，仿佛一个弯着腰、知识渊博的老学者，正在讲述着她一百多年来的沧桑岁月， 并勉励我们克服各种困难、勤奋学习，成为对国家有贡献的人才。
这就是我们百年老校的百年古树---凤凰木。
何凯文四级2020作文【三】
这是一个寒冷的冬天，路上的行人匆匆忙忙地赶着回家。一阵寒风吹来，行人便拉紧了大衣，行进的步伐也随之加快了不少。但是，在一处车站牌旁，一位母亲却抱着孩子倚在栏杆上瑟瑟发抖。只见牌上用粗体标注着“母子上车处”，可站在母子通道中间的，却是四个男人。
站着的第一个男人穿着厚厚的大衣，无所事事地将手插在口袋里。他不经心的瞧了一眼标识牌，想：什么母子上车处？只有像我这样的老板才有资格！他回头望了望后面一个男人，问：“喂！你是做什么的？”后一个男人说：“退伍军人。”他也注意了母子上车处的牌子，他正在从道德与利益的沼泽里艰难地挣扎着。可悲的是最终在他心中的利益赢了。可是他却十分不安，他想，算了吧！我是军人，为国家做了这么多贡献，是该让我享受待遇的时候了。于是他闭上了眼睛，想装作没看见。
第三个人虽不如他们高大，但身材却十分强壮。这个暴发户穿了一双名贵的皮鞋，使他自大起来，当他望了一眼标牌时，不禁笑了起来，想：看看旁边那些排队的傻子们，那么多人还在那里排，我很聪明，这里人多少啊！最后一个人带着口罩，瞄了一眼牌子，便站住了，仿佛在寻找这儿。
可怜的\'母子只穿了单薄的衣服，只能躲在角落瑟瑟发抖。
生活中有许许多多不道德的事情和行为，这种“假文盲”更是可恶，他们是真的看不懂吗？不，不是的，他们将自身的利益放在了第一，却将重要的道德抛之脑后，这种行为是可耻的！
就像草坪上立着“禁止践踏”的牌子，仍有人去踏，公共场所写着“禁止吸烟”，仍有人不顾他人的吞云吐雾……不道德的行为处处都在，而又有多少人能将利益稍微往后放一下呢？
多一些爱心，少一些私心，多一点道德，少一些缺德。好坏善恶只在一念之间，只看你如何选择。选道德爱心，你就有一颗纯净的心灵，选择自私自利，它会在你纯洁的心灵上留下永久的污点。
“假文盲”谈何道德？
何凯文四级2020作文【四】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
何凯文四级2020作文【五】
Dear all,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to my parents for teaching me to be positive and to be strong. “Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all.” is the opinion held by Aristotle. It is the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct even today, including my parenting.
It is widely acknowledged that parenting, which can also be explained as family education, is of great significance in our character forming and manner acquiring. To be more detailed, setting good examples instead of just giving precepts is the greatest achievement of my parents. They not only taught me to think for the best and prepare for the worst; they taught me how. They not only told me the benefits of being strong in mind; they proved it. All those things require huge amount of time and work, but it’s worth it.
Without my parents’ contribution and education, I would never be who I am now. But most importantly, I would never be more gratitude to them than today.
Yours,
XXX
何凯文四级2020作文【六】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
何凯文四级2020作文【七】
??时能红尘相见抒情作文在我们平凡的日常里，大家都尝试过写吧，写作文是培养人们的观察力、联想力、想象力、思考力和记忆力的重要手段。怎么写作文才能避免踩雷呢？下面是小编帮大家整理的何时能红尘相见抒情作文，希望对大家有所帮助。
清词古卷，梦影慌！碧柳清风，月明上！红尘深处，误入，独行荒野，天涯路。
卷叶珠连，落清窗！旧墨香雨，夜如霜！红尘如梦，婆娑，静谧孑眉，愁末央。
一场游戏，一场梦！一次邂逅，一份缘！
流水眷落花，空留指尖暗残香！相思蔓心扉，雪里花开惦记你！
红尘何处，似水，如劫，尽回忆！敢问，伊人何处，回首，尽梦息！
——题记/流星
夜雨萧萧，润无声大地。风声袅袅，幽满怀清宁。月色朦胧，披纱带雾，懵然了我的梦。静夜听歌，幽幽随风，浸染了我的心。我安安静静的落了笔，却又无处勾寻墨滴的印记。
细雨，落入寒冬的夜。耳边，听到的微声，或许，只是一种凡尘的回荡。就如私语，溅心间，愁眉上。回首，也不过是一点漪涟。秋光已别，寒冬凌冽了昨日的沉月，薄如衫，泛着黄，空留残枝落明梢。紧留几丝微风，沾染了时光的痕迹，勾人回味，且断肠！
深邃的夜，终于不用为尘世的一切去奔波。一杯咖啡，独自饮。一纸千文，独自品。一点碎语，独自念。如此，自言自语，自品自析，蹉跎了谁的青春？谁的梦？谁的心？
清浅的流年，拾沙缀梦，溅起半滴情泪，湿透青衫如画。可这夜，不知为何，蕴育了一帘冷冷的风，遮盖了曾有过的遐想与梦。留下一段缠绵的诗句，倾述了寂寞与相思的花瓣。却不懂，这是否会让人有些难过？也许，是你一次不经意的.微笑，印入我的脑海。也许，是你一个不经意的回眸，萦锁我的思念。我，终究是没能忘记！
昨日的温馨，温润了今日在文字，唯美的绽放，却又不知道为何孤独的彷徨！此生的情，此生的忆，轻蘸了一缕墨香，穿梭在文字的罅隙中，如一季的烟雨，隔着午夜的回廊，静静的想！静静的落！静静的回首着记忆！
风，吹动着平静的的心。岁月，撩拨着一些遗留的记忆。慢慢的，才知道，一切都似乎时远时近。一点碎念，在不经意间又浮出几点涟漪。原来，这么久没见，停留在最初的记忆，还是放在了心里，有些压抑，有些恍惚，周而复始的循环。转眼，却在时光的日历里缓缓的默记。或许，是时光太缓。初夏见，今未眠，徒留月色，漫步在回廊。倾听，袅袅心绪，百转千回。念起，浮萍细碎，叶柳沉思。也或许，是时光太急。转眼间已半年，一些事，一个人，挥之不去......
其实，我只是想，寻一个温柔的女孩，陪我，踏着三月的烟雨，将曾经写进昨日，让快乐留给明天，然后，一起去寻找属于自己的晴朗，自己的梦！
夕阳西去，灯火阑珊处回忆。小桥流水，思忆不息，梦里梦外，都是你！假如，相思渡口，我看见了你的浅笑迷离，此生，是否都无法忘记你！假如，尘世懵然，我梦见了你的笑靥如花，此生，是否都无法失去你！假如，白首相依，我能选择和你耳鬓厮磨，此生，是否都无法离开你！假如，我可以不爱不着迷，此时，风过无意，叶落无息，我是否还能，独吟一曲与相思无关的记忆......
曾经，总想用一纸信笺，写下一份简单的爱。在婉约的时光里，将幸福，在心里安然地渲染，直到永远。即使是岁月留给我的遗憾，也要去点燃，绽放所有风采。可是，现在，我却守着昨日的荒野，悉数记忆的沉沙，闭眼不思，默语不言！
如果，缘分注定的是迷茫，我该怎样寻找？如果，故事注定的是收场，我该怎样抉择？流年的故事，有些梦，有些人，是不是，都该忘？多少个夜晚，想起你！醒后，却是一种相思的无奈！那些曾经的短暂岁月，陪我走了一段很长很长的路。却又留给今晚的自己，一颗平静的心。远离了喧嚣，也远离了梦。只是没有人能懂，其中淡淡忧伤，为何那么沉、那么重！寒冬的月，自古的寥，谁又能看透看穿？流年似水，握不住青春，也留不住心。或许，人世，繁华与落寞，皆是一个轮回，一个游戏，一个梦。但，梨花如雪，我心欲飞，又何惧红尘，万丈渊？
反复看着你的回信，曾想过忘记你，可是，一切却像风，或隐或现，浮游浪迹在心里。雨落，风起，花飞，缘自谁一生？风过，云飘，雾散，写下谁一程？抹不掉，擦不去的气息；唤不醒，藏不住的眷念；抓不住，解不开的心绪；就像影子，闪来闪去，却又模糊不去，对你的回忆。猜不着，摸不透，你的心思；照不全，看不完，你的美丽；抓不到，弄不清，你的内心；就像幻觉，飘来飘去，却又摆脱不去，对你的记忆。我不知，该如何，不去想你！
不述情愁，不言沧桑，太多的人，太多的梦，或许已成曾。所以，管它何事烦恼，我们都学会了付之一笑，不在较真。但这相遇却是一种缘，裁剪了时光的愿，也燃起了流年的思念。哪怕是一点不灭，都很难放弃对这一切的眷念！但是不知为何，这棉卷如丝的眷念，却又凝结成了沙漏的碎点，零落在了那没有太多回忆的思念，仿佛曼陀罗花的花瓣，纷飞如火，无法忘记！也或许，无论在哪里，思念就像星空月光的雨，无处躲避！
触摸不到岁月的痕迹，我的心，一直在流年里浪迹，却又不知为何，被远方思念的你，装满了所有的记忆。就连现在的我，还想，再多看几眼，那深深印在我心里，你的轮廓，你的美丽......问你：“晶，在远方的你还好吗？”
夜深了，人困了，所以，我也睡了，睡在一个流星划过的夜！
