有什么适合放在作文里的句子【一】
好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
有什么适合放在作文里的句子【二】
下雪啦!下雪啦!一下课,我们便怀着激动地心情冲出教室,霎时被眼前的一切惊呆了,宛如置身于如梦如幻的童话世界中。
看,雪花让光秃秃的杨树枝儿变成了臃肿的银条,把梧桐树的枝枝杈杈打扮得像美丽的珊瑚,又像奇异的鹿角,给草坪铺上了一层厚厚的地毯,给静待绽开的茶花骨朵儿们点上了几朵纯洁的百合花。楼顶戴上了一顶无暇的帽子,道路上、篮球场上、跑道上盖的严严实实,校园里的小溪原本流动的溪水现在也被盖上了一层保护罩,整个校园都变成了玉琢银雕的世界。
一抬头,天空犹如无边无际的银河系,雪粒就像星河系中数不清的行星,飘洒着落在地壳上,又立刻被撞碎了。
雪越下越大,仿佛天女散花。屋檐下,整齐地挂着状如象牙、又似玻璃棒的冰棱子。操场上,同学们有的堆雪人,有的打雪仗,有的滚雪球,调皮的同学在上面表演“滑冰”,滑着滑着,不小心摔了个四脚朝天,到处飘荡着欢笑声,嬉戏声,叫喊声把树枝上的雪坨都震落下来了。
这场雪是一场快乐雪,把每个人都“感染”了,整个校园欢声笑语。使校园变的生机勃勃!我爱这场下在校园里的一场雪!