上海中考英语作文范文背诵【一】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
上海中考英语作文范文背诵【二】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
上海中考英语作文范文背诵【三】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
上海中考英语作文范文背诵【四】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
上海中考英语作文范文背诵【五】
今天作文课上，老师在黑板上写下4个大字《背诵比赛》。
比赛前，同学有的镇定自若，很有信心；有的头上冒汗，很紧张；还有的在复习《自助餐》上的内容。这时，老师发给我们一个小纸条，让我们在上面分别写上名字、诗的题目。我心想：老师葫芦里究竟卖的是什么药？写完后，老师让我们分别放到两个盒子里。
老师说：“游戏规则是：我从写著名字的盒子里抽，抽着谁，谁就上来，然后这位同学再在写这诗的.名字抽，抽出来哪首诗就背，背诵古诗一处不错的发一个“小牛”，现代诗错三处以下的发一个“小牛”。”听后，我想：我平时背得挺好，每次都当小老师，可这次我是面向大家，要是背错了多丢人啊！我的心有些紧张。
开始比赛了，当老师抽名字时，同学们开始大声喊叫，可当老师打开纸条时，班里一下子变得安静起来，侧耳听着老师说谁的名字，老师说：“李梓萌。”只见他慢吞吞地站起来，神色慌张地走上讲台，随便抽了一张，老师念道：“朱自清的《春》”哇，同学们不知谁发出一声尖叫，后排的同学都站起来了，因为这篇文章最长啊！大家都为李梓萌担心起来。他背时，一句一大哏，急得都冒出汗了，结果没得“小牛”，倒罚了一个。
第二个被抽中的是同学是赵心洁。只见她从容不迫地走上讲台，从容不迫地抽诗，然后又很有感情地、不紧不慢地背诵着，同学们都竖起耳朵，津津有味地听着。背到最后的时候，我们都不约而同地伸出大拇指，哇！这一个不错。
第三个被抽中的是特别人物——闻名全校的吕嘉欣。她学习成绩突出，各方面都很优秀，无人不知，无人不晓。抽诗的时候，只见她手有些发抖，将抽出的纸条紧张地交给老师。“《赠花卿》”老师一字一句地说道。吕嘉欣神色自若，胸有成竹地背完了，可是最后有一个音“只应”的“应”，吕嘉欣背成了四声，老师查了查字典，结果是她把音调背错了。这时只见她双手合十，多么希望她的读音是正确的呀，但事实证明，她读错了，她双手一摊，表现出一脸的无奈。
不知不觉一节课很快过去了，在紧张而又快乐的背诵中我们也学到了不少知识。我们真心希望老师给同学们多上几节这样的课堂。
